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for Prize: The Heart of Konoha

by kawaiikitsunethief

person blisblop
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way this Sasuke is turning out.This has good flow and suspence,ya,the action is unfolding at a good pace.
person Beryl
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrr! Every day I look here to see if ther is another part and what? Why don't you write? I really like this story!
person Demon
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! you have to update as soon as possible!
person silverfox
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon very great story a little kinky thought but great none the less
person jazzy
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story's not as grim as you made it out to be, its rather kind of soft in some ways. Whitch is not the least bit disapointing your doing a great job and I personally can't wait to read more. Though I was hoping that Naruto would have put up more of a fight and Sasuke could be a little more of a bastard, he's turning out softer than where the relationship warrants for right now, or the picture you were painting him to be in the first chapter or so.

I mean you want him to be a BASTARD until there comes a redeeming point a breaking point like Naruto get's through to him that he doesn't need to be evil to be strong or something. Or being around Naruto seeing him remaining strong cracks him, forces him to reevaluate his behavior or having him finally break Naruto, forces him to deal with the hell he went through and how the hell is he going to fix Naruto and himself, returning them back to something resembling normal right??

Love the creativity you have here and Welcome to the Darkside. MWhaha haha!


person SpIralSnow
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice but still waiting for the next chapter.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! .....actually, you probably updated a while ago, but I've been busy lately, soooooo........... ^^ Thanks anyway, and keep up the good work!!! I can't wai to find out what happens next!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
person blisblop
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this Sasuke .
person Kativa-chan
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! ^.^ Now, chapter 7 is the one I didn't read yet! I can't wait.
person Sukara
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! xD