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for Prize: The Heart of Konoha

by kawaiikitsunethief

person Bix
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. just WOW! I've been waiting for a fic like this one!!!!
I LOVE it!!! you gotta continue...it's great! and you describe naruto so god damn pretty...
^^
~Love
person Letta
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious about this diplomatic meeting, wondering who all is going to gawk at Naruto. Sasuke has kind of a twisted soft side, but it works so well for him.
person lo
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was at first wary when reading this story, but you are really creating something wonderful. THis is fantastic. I like how you are developing the story and the characters, and I fell that you are quite capable of moding and shifting the characters to this story. I am very impressed, keep up the good work.
person hogo-chan
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! your fic is so awesome! please update super fast! Your the best! Ever!
person Hitomi
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 6)
Amusing. But too quick paced. Slow down a bit; the secne when Sasuke masturbates Naruto could have a whole lot more humiliating and sexual.

Still, cool chapter.

Until the next,
Ja ne~
person :
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn...this is HOT. I always ignore rape (or close to rape) fics, but this is different. I think it's the mood - dark, lustful, yet with a touch of hopefulness for a happy ending.

I especially loved the way you described Sasuke - calm, stoic, and sexily dominating. I also like how there's hints of sincere love, but they're not overly fluffy or sappy like most authors tend to do.

And since I absolutely adore Naruto, could you...not make him cry so much? ^^;;; I know he's extremely sensitive (well, more than the average boy), but c'mon! He's a really strong character and he wouldn't show his weakness in front of Sasuke of all people.

Other than that, I LOVE this fic. The interactions between Sasuke and Naruto make my inner fangirl drool and giggle =)
person T.K-kun
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who would turn back from the italics!? haha ^^ anyways. this is still such a good story. continue on with it! update soon, please XD
person Maz
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waves her flag of yaoi and all things slashy*

Yay!
person akuma_river
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
person Kativa-chan
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eek, poor Naruto >_<