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by sakata

person kilmorden
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was gorgeous ^__________^ Sweet and sexy and altogether wonderful! I hope you write some more stories between the two of them like this, I loved it ^^
person Scottishfae
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore Gaara/Naruto pairings. I really think they fit well together with their similar backgrounds and such. That's one of the things that I think you really captured well within your fic. I love how you kept mentioning their mutual dependence on each other stemming from their childhoods of lonelyness and neglect. It was just beautiful...and smutty at the end which is always a good thing too! I really do like this fic and I wish more people would write Gaara/Naru pairings. If you know anywhere I can find some, I would so love you forever! Hehe, or maybe you don't want that! Anyway, again, for the hundreth million time, I loved your fic, the writing was just beautiful and flowed nicely and painted a nice potrait. The addition of the tradition, I assume that was a real tradition that you incorporated, was awesome and helped make the world seem a little more 3D. It made the whole piece feel like there was more world exhisting outside of just the two men and yet we were forced to focus on these two specific men and their relationship with each other. It's quite an effective literary tool, and you used it brilliantly!
person aoyagi
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaa! Gaara/Naruto. There's so few of these around, and this one is especially excellent. And while I would appreciate more, it seems to stand welll on its own. Though you might want to explain to people who don't know what Tanabata is.
person Ossia
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD OMG I want a naruto collar!!! But it has to come with the naruto :D This is an awsome story well done and Gaara/Naruto pairing are one of meh fav ^.^ Nice going
person Erika
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!! that was a great chapter...very nice...are you going to contiue this cause I'm pretty sure it can stand alone. WEll...THANKS:D
person Biokinetic
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_OGaara/Naruto..I love you to DEATH. I really truly completely do. Oh god..Gaara/Naruto..i thought everyone had given up on that and I was so fucking fustrated! FINALLY! PleasepleasePLEASE!Write another story..or a sequel. ANYTHING!