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Wow, I just finished reading this on zettai hentai and wanted to review because it was freaking amazing. Those last two chapters were unbelievable! I love how you tied in some of Naruto's memories just before the battle with Oro and how you described the sealing was so great. And for a second I thought it was going to be happy, happy, but then when Naruto was like bring him here. I was like aaah. But I think that was awesome the way it happened. And the scene in the last chap with the memorial and how he looks up at the sky. Oh gosh. This was just cool. I've never read anything like it and its ending. Man, there are so many things I still want to know about Sasuke. I'd kill for like a follow up, but that would probably ruin the whole feeling of the story, huh.

What's strange is at the end I wasn't... traumatized. I cried and all, but I think Naruto would be happy, and Sasuke... *wails* Who knows what will took place after the story ended... gosh I feel all emotional now. I wonder if that could ever happen in the manga. Your Jiraiya was really good too btw. It was all great. Gosh, those kids were right when they were always talking about how being a ninja isn't all fun in games. Anyway, thank you for an amazing fic!

I love your writing style, and I must also say that this is one of the best Naruto fics I've ever read. :) The only thing that bothered me was that the ending felt abrupt and forced, but the over all feeling you were going for came across I think. Excellent. Thanks for the read.

I love your fanfic! Its very different from your standard SasuNaru. Can I draw a fanart for your fanfiction? http://peppermint-t.deviantart.com in case you want to know my art style.

Wow... This is a really nice story. It made me cry a few times (haha, maybe I'm just too emotional).
It's easy to understand and doesn't use much of those flashy, chimp words either. I like the way you manage to mix humor and angst together. Good work!!

I'm still crying...huh...

waaaaaaaah!! *cries* it's over already? i was really hoping you'd go more into what happened to sasuke after... what his thoughts and feelings were... did he stay in konoha? did he feel anything for naruto?? damn, kinda unfulfilling ending, but i'm glad you at least kinda closed out the story for naruto's genin team... you could soooo do a follow up fic though.. even if only a few chapters... *pleads on hands and knees* pleeeeeeaaaaaasssseeee *ahem* ok well despite my wanting more than this, the story was still awesome.... *goes to wait for future fics* ja ne, lg

A well thought out, well written, and engaging story. You did a fantastic job of bringing this all to life and not just getting lost in PWP land or even in "I have five too many plots going at once" land. I bookmarked this so I could keep checking every week for an update! Really one of the best in the Naruto fan fiction world I've read. I will seek out your other work. I'm a fan. ^_^

PS I especially enjoyed the politics of renegade nin and how they are regulated. Nicely fleshed out there.

T______________________________________________T so saaad..!! i didnt expect them to end up like this...(the biggest advantage of your fic! its not predictable :D) but yea, i like the ending..its so complete, noting more, nothing less to add. naruto gave up his life for sasu, and it seems..dunno, right? like their destination :D i really enjoyed reading, i liked nagi, hikaru, kaiki, and now its hard to say godbay :P my FAVOURITE fic ever! YAAY! what can i do to make u write another? :D plzz! ^^

I love your writing and your ideas and such.. but.. ;__; this story is so sad~~ TT______________TT
Please write another story that is happier!!! <3 (I just don't like the ending of this story... not your writing or anything..just the idea that Naruto's died and Sasuke has no chance to do anything he killed Kakashi and and ;_________; )
Please continue writing!