rate_review Reviews

Very nice ending -- I liked the feel of "conclusion" and "peace" that you gave it (for lack of a better description). I'm glad that I got to read a fic as well written and deep as this one, even if it was sad. ^___^ Keep up the good work, and thanks for the experience!!!

this is a wonderful story. definitely something i'll need to bookmark so i can read it again X3

Wow....just. Wow. I read the first paragraph of the first chapter and knew right away that this would be a fic I'd like ^^ And in fact, I LOVE it. Gosh, I hope that wasn't the ending!! gah! hehe...but wow...I've never read a fic where Orochimaru took over Naruto's body and so it was really interesting and I just love love how you worked it out and carry the story along. Just..WOW. I am so very impressed with how you've written the story and the complications of it all...I even find myself fond of Naruto's genin team and I almost never like oc's haha. I'm so glad you didn't make the three kids like Team 7 was b/c too many fics have that parallel. But I really liked the kids...Kaiki is a smart one ^^

And I really like your characterization of Sasuke...b/c I do believe that when the time comes, he will give his body to Orochimaru and then Naruto will have to deal with that (in the manga, I mean). Well, this was just so well written...I loved it. Hope to see an update soon! ^^

ai yi yi!! omgoddess!! another great chapter, though i'd expect nothing less ^___^ veeeeeeeeeeeeery well-written, all the interaction between kaiki, nagi and hikaru... so great! you really do those kids justice as OCs, taking the time to develop their characters a lil rather than just throwin' em in for the hell of it.., the flashbacks giving a bit more history and a bit of foreshadowing, the description of the shiki fuujin... ahh, sooo great... but, damn, really pullin' on the heartstrings here, too... so now if naru's really dead, but perhaps also sealed within sasuke .. hmm.. *ponders what'll happen next* and also, did the shinigami take the kyuubi in exchange for their contract??? ah, well hopefully i'll find out next time, ne? hope it doesn't take too long!!! *gives her coveted strawberry pocky as incentive* ^___~
~matane

this...omg...this is absolutely beautiful. I really REALLY can't wait for more of it. I was chewing on my fingernails for that last chapter. You have an amazing style, very fluent and flowing. I think my favorite aspect of your style (and maybe this sounds kinda weird, but it's true) is how you wrap up each of the sections in the chapter. Your closing sentences are so harsh and beautiful...urg...excuse me while I bow down and worship your style a bit more. :3

(Ouch, I have a headache...) <--- Not because of your story, no, no, no...Just from looking at the computer screen from an odd angle.
Maybe I'm just over emotional or something, but I was tearing up again...*sighs* I just think this is a beautifully written story and I also particularly like it how you've created such humorous original characters. Normally I dislike OCs, but I quite like these three...There's just something about them that makes them seem as real as the ORIGNAL Naruto crew. Maybe it is because they have a bit of that ‘Ninja Flare’ that Masashi-san portrays nicely…And you’ve given them that too! Now, I’ve got a question: Are they based off any other characters, from other series, or solely from your imagination?
Whahahaha, and now I am off to the next chapter!
But first, a gift: Strawberry Strudel.

I hope you don't mind all of the bakery goods...

Oooh, I was cut off...
(Ouch, I have a headache...) <--- Not because of your story, no, no, no...Just from looking at the computer screen from an odd angle.
Maybe I'm just over emotional or something, but I was tearing up again...*sighs* I just think this is a beautifully written story and I also particularly like it how you've created such humorous original characters. Normally I dislike OCs, but I quite like these three...There's just something about them that makes them seem as real as the ORIGNAL Naruto crew. Maybe it is because they have a bit of that ‘Ninja Flare’ that Masashi-san portrays nicely…And you’ve given them that too! Now, I’ve got a question: Are they based off any other characters, from other series, or solely from your imagination?
Whahahaha, and now I am off to the next chapter!
But first, a gift: Strawberry Strudel.

Maybe it'll work? Well, if it doesn't...I'll cry.

*Ahem* My headache is not because of your story, no, no, no...Just from looking at the computer screen from an odd angle.
Maybe I'm just over emotional or something, but I was tearing up again...*sighs* I just think this is a beautifully written story and I also particularly like it how you've created such humorous original characters. Normally I dislike OCs, but I quite like these three...There's just something about them that makes them seem as real as the ORIGNAL Naruto crew. Maybe it is because they have a bit of that ‘Ninja Flare’ that Masashi-san portrays nicely…And you’ve given them that too! Now, I’ve got a question: Are they based off any other characters, from other series, or solely from your imagination?
Whahahaha, and now I am off to the next chapter!
But first, a gift: Strawberry Strudel.
I hope you don't mind all of the bakery goods.

I think I now know why my eyes are running like this...Not only is it because your story is heartbreaking but I have a cold...My nose is running away.
A real heart clincher this is turning out to be. Not that I mind. I like those melancholy type stories, although I do admit if you read to many of them it gets you depressed as well.
But I still see this particular story as 'sweet', because I still remember the previous relationship Naruto and Sasuke had. (And the really odd problem I have is that whenever I read fan fictions, I'm always adding in little bits and pieces from previous reads...So sometimes I make a story more sad then it's supposed to be, or more drama-filled or even more cheerful then it was originally written.)
Wait a moment...Now, I do know that if you're going to explain this you'll do it later, but I have yet another question to ask: Did Sasuke kill Kakashi when he was himself? Or was that Orochimaru?
Anyhow, I'm going to finish off the last current chapter, than I'm off to Never Land! ^^
-Peter Pan gives you a Pan Pipe.

Yosha!

Dooooooooood!! ahhh!!! There was no '~End~' or '~Fin~' or "~TBC~" gaaah!! lol So you better be continuing this! OMGODDESS!! ahhh ok breathe...wow. seriously, just wow! And ok, so Oroch is now in Naruto's body? And Naruto is going into Sasuke's body? So that leaves...Kyuubi and Oroch in Naru's body...aiee! I hope I'm thinking way too much into that cuz that would be oohhhh so bad lol gah! I dunno how you're gonna pull this one off! There must be some REAL Sask/Naru!!! *whimpers* This fic is soooo good and yes I still love the OCs! It's kind of funny, cuz at first w/ all the contact you were havin the kids do i was thinking, 'damn girl! you naughty naughty girl!' lol but then i started to think about how most 12 yr olds act and was thinkin of my neph and his best friend and they do get all close like that so you do a pretty good job w/ that ^____^ But yeah, anyways, another great chap and I beg that this will continue for many more chaps! Feel free to email me and let me know so I don't have to worry until the next up'd! ^___~

~Matane