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Aaaaaah?! *jumps with joy* Yeeesss, I'm so happy! *throws confetti all over the place* I'm grinning so foolishly now. Now the sad ending –maybe- can be…delayed? Oh my.
A beautifully written chapter! Wonderful, wonderful! Nagi, Kaiki, and Hikaru crack me up; crazy kids. And I really like how you draw out Naruto...It makes me love his character all the more...(And I always think, 'Will Naruto really be like this when he get's to this age?' Hmmm, maybe.)
Yeah, Orochimaru has a sense of humor...And as much as I like that creep (Yes, I still like him), I feel like slapping him. A mutual kind of love, y'know?
You like cupcakes? That’s good! Lesse...How about...Fudge! Everyone loves fudge! ^^ And you deserve to be pampered! Ki ki ki ki ki ki ki ki…!!!

Holy Shit!!! This fic ROCKS!!! XP I love it!!! Very kewl idea, and quite well done, too -- I love the characterization of Naruto, and the whole "genin team" thing is soooooo funny, lol. ^___~ I can't wait to find out where you plan to take this,so keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!

......wait a minute.............. *has the feeling that Twisted-sheets knows something that she doesn't* ...actually, it wasn't that hard to figure out......... ^^ Well, damn. Why the heck must all of the really good stories I stumble upon have a bad ending? Why, why, why??? Can't I find a really awesome fic that has a -good- ending for once?!?! *sigh* ^^ Okay, I'm done.......oh, and I still love this, so I -am- going to finish it, no matter what! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! *wanders off to try and find a fic that has a good ending and is also good enough to be in the same league as this one* Damn...this is gonna' be hard............... XP

*Claps* Another superb chapter, I must say! Very well written, again, and a great use of words. I absolutely adore how you’re portraying Naruto. And that little bit with Orochimaru/Sasuke and Naruto was rather…*laughs* Well, I liked the whole thing. (To put it simply, I could quite easily imagine that scene.)
Everyone is completely in character. It’s amazing! This is brilliant work. I’m laughing throughout the entire story; well, no, not through the entire thing, but close.
So, you get another gift…*hands you a cupcake* ^^
And I’m off to the next chapter.

Wow, just…Wow! *gasps* This was a brilliant chapter, albeit a bit depressing. But I still think this story is so wonderful…
I don’t know how to put my thoughts into words –again-.
There were a few grammatical errors in this chapter, but nothing -too- serious. I like how the training with the ‘brats’ is coming along. Naruto makes me laugh so much… But the final meeting with Sasuke was the icing on the cake; heartbreaking, those last sentences were.
---Eventually, while he stroked his back, Sasuke's breathing evened out and he fell asleep; Naruto stayed awake and spent the night running a hand over the curse seal, again and again and again.---
Ah, that broke me up, I tell ya…I didn’t cry, per se, but I was feeling the mood. *sigh*
Anyway, I’m cheering for that next chapter! And if this is the ending, well…It suppose it would be an okay ending…Not everything turns out perfect.
Your gift for this chapter…Well, it’s forth coming. It may take me a LOOOONG time, but…I’ll contact you via email when it’s done. *grins* What could it be..?

AAaaaaah??! This is awesome! Wow! The idea is so...*grins* I can't even put my thoughts into words! Also, your grammar and spelling: PERFECT! That makes a reading experience much more enjoyable. Good work!
I love how Naruto is taking all of this, too. It just seems so in character, it makes me LAUGH! I could definitely see this actually happening in the real series…(Although, deep down I know it most likely won’t, but…It’s just that good.)
Anyway, I’m off to read the next chapter! (By the way, I hope you don’t mind, but I’m going to save this story to my computer…Is that alright?)

agr...im so going to kill U for such an ending................................................ XD im not after an owfull fluffy and happy thing, but now i feel damn unsatisfied, like sth's missing :P yea, "He went home and began dating women." is NOT enough and sux :P sryyyyyy, but compared to the whole fic, ending is preety lame :P
anyway, it was one of the best described sex scenes ive ever read :D and It was..well.. impressed :D rest of the fic as well hehe You`re simply a master so write moooooooore!!! :D i wanna read more of your fics :D keep up good work! (exept endings :P yea) ^^

The FF.net version looked fine to me. Too bad it didn't get so many reviews as it SHOULD! This fic is sooo good.

Everytime I read this fic it makes me wanna cry, because I know how it ends...

*cries*

Really enjoyed your story. Well plotted, good composition, and an engaging read. I liked how you made Naruto have his own faults, you didn't change him, just made him grow older with experience to back up his behaviour. The scene with Orochimaru gave me goose bumps! Was it his really loooooong tongue, or a normal tongue? I've bandied about this question with some other Naruto fans about Orochimaru and his attributes. They seem to be passed along to one body to another when he takes a new one. Got any ideas?

Niiice. I like this lots - you write well, and the set up of Naruto and the current situation is really smooth. Everyone seems IC, and I like the little tadpoles so far. Looking forward to reading more, and seeing how Naturo deals with being a teacher and the poor little mights deal with it as well!