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*Rubs Narutos ass-cheecks* I feel sorry for you Naru-chan xD

This is a very interesting story. Sasuke is really disturbing me, but that's ok. =) I can't wait till the next chapter. ^_^ Could you email me when you put up a new chappie? Please. ^_^

If by 'Janpesse' you mean 'Japanese' then your full of crap. If you were Japanese, then you'd at least be able to spell it correctly...And the characters are WAY OOC...I can't believe you can even say they aren't. You really can't write, I'm sorry, but this sucks a lot. The only reason that you get nice reviews, is because people just want to read lemons, which also sucks by the way. Jeez, do us all a favor and delete this piece of crap.

lol we Japanese people do not use the word "Japanese" , we used Nihonge, so forgive him if I spell it wrong!!!! Japanese is an American word.

ok Kativa-chan I am Janpesse and I have seen all of the Naruto show from 1 to 129 and can't wait from 130. I do not feel that my Characters are out of Character and I have an A in my English class.

To start off, this isn't a flame. This is constructive criticism.

First of all, everyone is Out of character(OOC) there's no doubt about that. There are many spelling and grammer errors. Is English your first language? Because it doesn't seem to be. Also, have you seen the entire series so far, or have you just read the American translated manga? Another thing, the spacing is makes it very difficult to read. Also, are you at a young age? Because the so-called 'lemon' scenes weren't written very well. It's one to be writting your first lemon, but that was just plain bad.

Hey koyote, it's me Sasukeb. I wrote My new Family, anyway I know that you did not "bother reading the whole story, Because the Characters are one dimensional and utterly unbelievable, paragraphs chunky, there's a distinct lack of flow and the plot is juvenile and clichéd" but I wrote Chapter 5 with what you said in mind . So I hope that you read it and let me know if that chapter does anything for you? I hope it help you to see why my Naruto and Sasuke act the way that they do, will Chapter 4 will tell you why Sasuke acts the way he does so read both 4 and 5 and please tell me if it is to your liking and do post your reply on my story's Reviews pages or whatever it is called. ok bye from now Sasukeb.

Awwws!!! *Starts snifflinf* thats sad ;-;, but very good work ^_^ Keep it up, ne? ^_^

Ja Ne

Waiii you're so right. I really thought that chapter was the saddest and the cutest... awww cute Naruto-kun :) Wow, so Sasuke wrote that poem for Naruto eh, that's really s-weet. So I guess, even b*stards have their nice moments ^^ Go NaruSasu! weeeeeee!

Awww!!! Thats so sad, Naruto didn't want to do it ;-;, and Sasuke forbids him to be friends with Shikamaru ;-; Keep up the good work, ne? ^_^

Ja Ne