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for My new Family

by SasukeB

person Sukara
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just what Shez said!!! Space put hte paragraphs and I'm sure it'll be a great story ^_^

Ja Ne (Again!)
person SasukeB
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I did not think to do that , but I went back and did it so I hope you all like it ok bye
person Amber
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need some spacing. It hurt to read on many levels.
person Amber
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I also want to add that you need to go back and read/watch the series. Really! This is some bad hentia story where characters orgasm and proceed to act like brainless whores.