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September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure but, isn't all of this happening while they are both still in the dojo? So, none of this is actually really happening in the real world, just inside Sasuke's sharingan genjutsu.????
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE THE MOST AMAZING..mmmmmmmmMMMmm...fucking visual writer fuck like ever......ha i had to re frame from ...not going there ooohhh you mmmm cant you such a fucking short chapter!!! and i love your humor!!
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I'm just wondering why my reviews aren't showing up...I got a couple of them by email and they aint here...hmmm...oh well.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Body of review from Indigobloo follows:
ehh i think i'm old fashion..this is like the 2nd story i[ve read and it's not dramatic enough for me..i like stories where tey just meet or suddenly have feelings for each other but it takes a lot of drama and close to love/hard or harsh teasing before someone gives in like Rasengan22's work and the romance seens aren't explicit enough either so yeah..
ehh i think i'm old fashion..this is like the 2nd story i[ve read and it's not dramatic enough for me..i like stories where tey just meet or suddenly have feelings for each other but it takes a lot of drama and close to love/hard or harsh teasing before someone gives in like Rasengan22's work and the romance seens aren't explicit enough either so yeah..
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Body of review from Verakum follows:
Sorry to say this but fuck you ... you never made them fuck each other and always teasing us... and doing all shit in the best parts... FUCK this shit
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. OSM...wtf...you suck...hard...oh...yeah...harder...harder! Oh! I mean, wtf...you shoulda just beta'd it as you read then you comma nazi!! YOu know how awful i am at commas! *sigh* I do have corrected chapters...one day i will be all "OSM! Please beta my finished final absolutely LAST revision for me!!!"
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XD
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3 HAS TOO MANY COMMAS!!!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-hopelessy tries to stifle nosebleed from chapter 6-
Goddammit I ran out of tissues!!
Goddammit I ran out of tissues!!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-__- i like it i like it, u got my courosity piked...but this isn't what i usally read...at first wasn't sasuke looking forward to being fucked BY naruto???