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OMFG! i tty thought they were doing...something..*coughs* else
that was great!
i have a dirty mind...>.<

naru/sasu,please.i like your story,by the way.

I adore the way Sasuke clutches the keys to his chest,with narrowed eyes ,like Naruto or someone is gonna take them away.The bitch slap was great fun too.

Huh?Wha..?I......Ummm.I await further illumination.Besides if they aer back in the mirror eye why are these problems happening?

OMG i am like three seconds away (not true cuz it's almost 4 a.m. here) from writing a fic dedicated to this "serialhuggers" group because i know nothing about it, yet i'm pretty sure i've read a lot of stories that revolve around said "cult." I love all those stories, and it's like your famous cause you even are the star of one of my favorite stories, "Get Well Soon." luckie, why does your humor translate so well in all of your stories? *bummed* well, the next time i attempt to write something funny, i want to dedicate it to you, but i don't think you'll like it because it'll probably seem stiff. ah well, but still this was fun/funny and the first couple chappies, the suspense was hot. and i love a gang bang no jutsu. you don't read much about that. but still, i hope there might be another chapter??? i'm interested to see if you go narusasu or sasunaru (i personally looove narusasu because it's so rarely done well) but i empathize with you for turning it sasunaru because, well, that just tends to happen. i say the same thing sometimes... i want to write narusasu, and then it doesn't happen. bah. why is that. hey but you started it, so dammit, chain sasuke up and let naruto rape him. naruto needs to get over the hangup of tasting his own cum, dammit. bah.

OMG!!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUSE!

INSPERATIONA:!!!

ah! i can't believe i never knew you continued this story! shame on me!! (and i even got the 'got the joke in the first chapter' prize! thankies!! *glomps*) well i just read it all and it's been hotness all the way through, but keeps me giggling here and there as well with naruto and sasuke's antics :p and as for round 7 vers. 1 and 2, lol i kinda liked em both; though i do think i'm happier with #2 continuing things in the bath.. lmaolmaolmao for naruto saying having his own cum in his mouth would be like cannibalism! XDDDD now, oh no! what IS sasuke planning?? will naru's sweet virgin ass EVER be safe?? XD ..i can't even decide if i'd rather it be naru/sasu or sasu/naru lol, so i'm just ridin the wave you give us and await the next chapter to see what happens!!

DO BOTH!Jeez.grumble...finally updates...grumble ...cliffy,snort...straightens out.Thank you so much ,Writer Sama I love this Sasukes mind...well the part of it working right now.

Ok, I'm going make this short and sweet (for me anyway). Actually, I kinda liked Ch. 7 as it was. It was so deliciously cruel, and such a Sasuke bastard thing to do, really. But, you're going to go wherever you're going to go.

I would like it to be Naru/Sasu, if you're asking. Hee-hee. I've got a weak spot for that, I guess you could say. But up until recently, I thought that's what it would be. With Sasuke as a "dominant uke", which is unusual, but could work well-especially with how you started this story. You know, how Sasuke was so manipulative and essentially goading Naruto to give in, let him chain him up, be the seme. Like in S&M where the submissive is really the one in control. Not that I know anything about that. Um, yeah. But now that thing's have changed . . .

Ah, well, this is still fun.

On a completely separate note, I'm glad you're now using italics instead of all the CAPITALS. That did kinda bug me. Also a little thing, that being weird as I am I just have to mention: it should be "throes of passion" rather than "throws of passion".

Anyways, that's all. Happy writing!