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by Kusachu

person chi no hana
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oki, i read this again, and saw the number of reviews, and now i am reviewing again to PROVE MY IMPATIENCE!!! you know you leave a lot to our imagination with that cliffie!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, girl. Long time no chat, huh? Ah, college is a bitch -- an admittedly fun bitch, and waaaaaaay better than highschool, but still a bitch. XP I don't think I've ever written this many papers in my LIFE! ......oh, wait. Okay, that was REEEEALLY stupid. >.< But whatever, it's 4-something in the morning, so I have a semi-legit excuse, ne? ^^ Just wanted to let you know that I absolutley LOVE the turn of events -- spectaularly fantabulous, and all that jazz. Can't wait for the next chapter -- keep up the good work, and "drop me a line" sometime, k? *uber glomps* Ja ne!!! b^__^d (Wow! I never realized how much I missed doing that!! Kewlness.......) d^__^b (The "mirror reflection", lol!)
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ this is sooo unfair!!! i hope i can last till you update, i am nearly dying of a nosebleed here!
person Smurf-chan (of the serialhugger collective)
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I found you! Finally!

Oh, and if i pop up on your contacts list that was an accident... hehe I didnt unclick the box... so no I am not stalking you... unless that is you want me to (??) LOL.

I just had to come and see what you get upto on AFF that you dont on FF.net.

Well Im off to write you an e-mail now.

Lots of Oreos!

Smurf
person Hellagoddess
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAMETE NOSEBLEED NO JITSU! lmao! this is great! I love it! Specially the bit with the clones...poor Mr Uchiha's at a bit of a disadvantage i must say! *smirk* *crosses fingers and hopes for lemon*

Awesome story...keep up the good work!

Hellagoddess
person Liliath
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lolz, shroom XDDD just as you..to write something pervy like this,lol!! XDD keep it up!!
person ...
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to put a disclaimer on all your chapters. Or it'll be deleted soon.
person One_Sick_Mind
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*screaming* RAPE AND CHAINS!!!!! RAPE AND CHAINS!!!!!! RAPE AND CHAINS!!!!! RAPE AND CHAINSSSS!!!!!!

Ch 1- OMG, the Hhhhh Hhh Hhhhh's make them sound SO PERVERTED!!!! Like they're making a dirty telephone call! XD Beautiful!

Ch 5- *blankly* "Keys"? I don't get it... :\
Holy shit this fic is hot, and they're not even fucking yet. It is so. seriously. hot. I've been trying to learn a lesson about going slow and letting the anticipation build instead of throwing a couple characters together and having them fucking halfway through the first chapter, because of fics like this.

Ch 6- Ha ha ha, 4 definitions for "shi!" (Cuz one of the definitions is "4"...)
OMG, the other narutos! ^___^ Especially Naruto # 3, felling kinda left out and "taking things into his own hands" and when he was getting different persepctives I thought "camera" before it was mentioned in the fic! Bwaaah ha ha! So much love!!

*goes back to demanding hot sexy images of Sasuke being raped in chains* RAPE AND CHAINS!!! RAPE AND CHAINS!!! I swear to god, if you don't write it I WILL!!!!! RAPE! AND! CHAINS! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, so worth it !
person Evil Chibi
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*mega nosebleed* :D I love it!!!