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by Kusachu

person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I just spent 10 minutes going though 4 damn pages of fics looking for "Tease" so that I could read your "response review" that you told me about in your e-mail...... and then, after reading it, I went back to the "first page" and what do I see??? >.< "Tease" just so happens to be the first one there!!! Gah!!! *spazzes* I don't believe it!!! Either my timing sucks, or yours does......or it's the fact that it's currently 2:45 in the morning and I'm not thinking properly. Yeah, that's probably it....... oh, and the annoying voive in my head isn't helping any, either. *glares pointedly into her mirror* (Hell yeah, I'm talking about you!!! .............so what if I just now figured out how to get to the review page for a fic without actually writing a review? It's not like it's ever mattered before ...............gods, it was soooo nice when you were "quietly" going though smut withdrawl -- it actually gave the "others" a chance to "talk" for once!!! .............no, I don't care, and yes, I will intentionally refrain from reading anything online for an extended period of time if you don't shut up RIGHT NOW ...........though so. *smug smirk*) Gomen, gomen, you should know by now what happens when I'm up late..... then again, that's when all of my best ideas happen, so I don't hear you complaining, now do I? ^___~ Well, I have to go -- I've got a long-ass day to look forward to: think project, room pick-up, graduation announcements to prepare, and other homework, too. >.< I hate school........ *sigh* I'll try to answer your e-mail sometime soon -- feel free to go ahead and send me Chapter 2/whatever else needs "beta-ing" whenever you want to, and I'll try to kill two birds with one stone, as it were. Oh, and by the way, I liked this chapter. ^___~ Kinda' forgot to mention that here, now didn't I? (Lol) ^___^ Ah, well, I mentioned it in the "notes" as well as in my e-mail, so it's all good........ d(^-^)b *yawns* Ja ne!!!

(P.S. Out of curiosity, did you change the font of what I wrote, or did AFFnet do that? Because if it wasn't you, we're gonna' need to find some way to distinguish my babble from yours -- it was a bit confusing at times. Ah, well.....let me know, k? Bye!!!)
person roni-chan
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyyy! loved this chapter. i love smut ^____^;;; *sheepish grin*

anyway, i like the atmosphere thing youve created here. candles + mirrored walls + steam = shmexy.

keep it up ill keep reading. *big hugs*
person dagget
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definately worth it !!!! more!! want more!!!!!!!!!!!!
person blisblop
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chains and clones and whip cream and rim jobs and more posing Sasuke in slutty positions and making him talk like the biggest submissive this side of Kisame. I love it D.U.sama,aghhh more please i beg you harder and faster please.sobs...please
person alexs_littleduckling
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh-heh...heh heh...heh hehheh...wow! that is realy,,,eh-hem...good...so very ummm, citrusy!I must applaued you to a job well done....can't wait till you update!....eh-heh...
person Mask
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH YOUR GOD! ...... never ....never .... stop...... that was .... how do you say HOT! *drool* god I think I'll need a blood transfusion now I lost so much blood. But it was so fucking worth it.
*huggles* love it.
person avri
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy! that was HOT. ~ love.
person Tsuya-Chan
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O oh my that was rather hott... I can't get the yummy images out of my head....
person Kai
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Soooo......you like sexy reviews, huh?
Oooooh.......ShiUchi-sama, PLEASE, I need it so bad......please don't teaase......AHH!
Heheh....but sweriously, I ALMOST CAME! I was wetter than I have EVER been!
So pleease continue!
Love ya!
Kai
person kai
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesomeness! i loved it!! yay for helpful clones!! XP update soon