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woh !!!!!!!!!!!
this is sure hot ! ( nose-bleeding !)
so naruto intends to fail the test and lure Sasuke !!!!!!
AH, how wonderful !
can't wait to see what's happening next. What if Neji find out ?
please update soon !

I came to your homepage, just to have a look, you know, and I saw something horrible. I said this fic was dead. Dead! No, nonononono, certainly not. Sure, you hate a long time before writing the next chapter. But this is such a graet fanfic! You made them exactly how I love them to be. Sasuke is a pervert who's totally obsess with his student and Naruto a braty prankster, cross-dressing (love it) and uke (as he always should be, especially with Sasuke) but not girly! Your lemon is one of the better I've read. You make it go slow, it's well described, very detailed, various position and very important (for me) in various places! I think sex in bed is soooo boring, in dangerous places is hot. And it's even more of it! The plot, cause there is one even if it's smutt. Well, it's obvious that if Sasuke is a pervert he still like Naruto pretty much. The interessant part is Naruto. I think it's kinda easy to see that he hide the fact tha he wants Sasuke so much by making it an obligation in order not to fail. It's a plan: 1: failing. 2:make a deal. Some points prove it: 1: he only fail math. 2: he's good at math, as he let slip. 3: he's not just a slut, as he doesn't want Neji to touch him. 4: he's not even reluctant to Sasuke's touches, on the contrary. 5:Exept in the end, where he plays difficult to get to make Sasuke crazy. 6:Naruto wouldn't care if he doesn't have more than just enough to pass (hell, I don't even think he would care not to if it wasn't for Iruka). It's very well written (and two lemon as good as those in the second chapter, whoa!) and if you made mistakes, well, I only see very obvious ones and when ther isn't much, I don't care, I'm french, so it doesn't matter too much. Anyway, there is more, and I want to read more! Sasuke is cracking with need and Naruto is resisting him. I want to know how Sasuke will dicover Naruto's plan and if Naruto know that Sasuke really loves him and when they'll be discover (by Neji, I'm sure). Well, there is great potential for much more chapters, so pleeeeeease, don't stop here! Good luck! Ja ne!

i like it uber much! More please.

well that was fucking sexy as hell!!! wow i loved it lots i wonder what will happen next?????

I'm so coolio. 8D xDD ((Is Carmen)). I'm glad you finally updated. =] The chapter was so good and yummy!! With the the hawt lemons and stff. xD I'm so proud of you. The little one ((you)) is growing up too quickly, it makes me want to cry. xD Well I hope you don't take for ever on the next chapter or else i'll have to do some more bugging, eh? xD Great work. =3

I also hope Sasuke and Naruto get together. xD

dude....update soon please and thank you....i'm freakin die'n here!!! oh the nasty of it all...oh and i really like the part where naruto knew how many points he got from sasuke...seems like someone playing stupid ummm i wonder any who, update k!

~ ja.

Usually I'm not one for instant gratification I like a story with more depth but this one however is getting deeper with each chapter please right more.

Holy begeezus is freakin hot and a sailor fuku that was pure genious, genious loved it.

yummy kinkiness .

but at the same time it's still one of the cutest things ever. Insecure sasuke rocks <3

update soon !

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