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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done.
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great, and the way you cut it off at the end, it was perfect. By 'picked it up somewhere' do you mean the word, or the fact that that was his name. I love the explanations, of course I doubt the Fourth Hokage planned the sealing in advance, at least not that far. Still, it was good, you should write more like this.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how sad...
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! that wasn't bad! Short and sweet. I like how you used the name Arashi...hegh hegh...Did you know that it means "storm"? I personeally am going to be pissed if Yondaime's name turns out to be different than that. But that's beside the point. Anyway, this fic was pretty good. It was an interesting take on the whole thing...Are you planing on adding more or is this a one shot?
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was good, especially for a first timer, it's one of the best i've seen that really deals with Naruto's mother, it was great.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! ^__^
i luv it soo much!
ur fic is great!
please continue. i want to know what happens next.
i luv it soo much!
ur fic is great!
please continue. i want to know what happens next.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhh! Soooo sad! *sob!*
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well written and touching. awesome job. :D
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is so sad but at same time so awesome. This is a great fanfic! Stays true to characters of the anime even though little is know of naruto's parents. But same time I could see this happening in anime or manga if they ever did something on naruto's birth. I wish they used your idea if they did too.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* this is so sad, but well written. Keep up the good work