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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you continued this story, it is one of the few that really catches my attention. Any way, well done I am looking forward to your continuing it.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY !!! their together again ::: jumps up and down::: ... but did you have to stop it there ::: pouts and sighs:::
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo was up Monkey lady Love the fic. If you keep it up II;ll stay around hows that for a deal.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeeze..... You write very well...... a LOT better then the normal at MM or FF...... i'll wait for any new chappies, and.... seriously, you have a knack for writing...... makes me wanna read more..... I'd write chapter stories, but i'm a poetry guy, myself..... :p
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I love this story! You are so awesome!
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG YAY HES HOME!!!!!!!! but dude what happened to ichiro / jiro freako twins? and wtf was with naruto being semi-attracted to hinata! omg that better be resolved somehow... like either it being nothing or naruto finding his special someone or SOMETHING cuz it'd totally ruin everythign if he had a thing for hinata >anyways, in case you didnt get that i really like this, I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS FANFIC PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING cuz it seems like his coming home isnt the end of the story... SO YEAH PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE (who gives about betas, if thats whats slowing you down... the last few chappies seem fine to me....)
ehheh ^^U super long review... which i normally dont do... so feel special! XP
ehheh ^^U super long review... which i normally dont do... so feel special! XP
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG THEY CUT OFF MY REVIEW? DIE!
continuation of my review: anyways, if u didnt get it the first time, i REALLY like this, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue (im assuming sasuke's coming home's not the end cuz it doesnt seem like it) and who gives about betas if thats whats slowing you down, those last few chappies seem fine to me XP SO PLEASE UPDATE!
continuation of my review: anyways, if u didnt get it the first time, i REALLY like this, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue (im assuming sasuke's coming home's not the end cuz it doesnt seem like it) and who gives about betas if thats whats slowing you down, those last few chappies seem fine to me XP SO PLEASE UPDATE!
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, thanks for sharing it. i like the gradual development of the relationship
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep up te good work! I look forward to each new chapter.
I like how you write.
I like how you write.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
by the gods i hope that you update soon!! this story has been a "page turner" for me, and i can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring after such a long seperation! i usually don't go for heavy ooc, but your version of sasuke is a nice change from the norm. you're quickly becoming one of my favorite fic authors! you inspire me to finish my own uncompleted story... please update soon!!