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by bean1498

person rayn
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello
This is a very good story and i hope you continue with it.
person Chelsey
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still love this. Update soon!
person Mariam
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
‘I hope you had a nice day with Naruto. –Hinata’. He smiled when he saw the little happy face she’d drawn on the note

That cracked me up.
person priestess123
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story so much! I hope you get a chance to update soon! It's so wonderfully different!
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yey for chapter 6! keep um coming
person sasuhinafan
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised you don't have any reviews, this story is the awesomeness!!
Hope you update soon
person Hokai Amplifier
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is just beautiful. I'd really appreciate it if you could update. ^^
person ashley
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this a great story please update soon with many chapter. can wait for the next chapter. i love hinata and sasuke stories keep writing them .
person jlynnd86
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Great Great Awesome Awesome Awesome Story

I love the whole alternate pairings thing... especially Sasuke and Hinata. It's freakin' beautiful to me. I've been waiting for... well, forever for you to update. It's my fav. Sasu/Hin fanfiction so far. I love how you brought them together. I mean, yeah, Sasuke seems a little "nicer" than he normally is, but he can't be a hard-ass for his entire life. I'm sure he gained it with years of kindness and love from his dear friends :P Sappy huh? Anyway, keep up the excellent work. PLEASE don't have his twins grown up and hate each other. It would be great if he made it back soon though. I kinda want to see his reaction to the whole Hinata missing him so much and him having twins thing. Plus... the longer it takes for him to get back... the smaller his chances of "gettin' his freak on with his wife" gets... unless you plan on having him do some "alternate" positions with Ms. Hinata :) It's completely up to you. You're rockin' this story so far. Keep up the great work... and good luck with chapter 7.

*** Please don't wait another couple of months to put out another chapter... pretty please!***
person starrygirl
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! screw those toddlers and finish up the story...LOL just kidding. it's great that you're teaching them. they are the future after all.

anyway's the story's looking great. not that much romance but it's still good.

still, is it going to be a long time until sasuke comes back? I feel bad for hinata...who's gonna help her with the babies? sure kakashi's gonna train them if he doesn't come back, but I don't want it to turn out to be a kakashi/hinata fic. eww...kinda creepy now that I think about it...

Keep up the good work!