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OMG, this is so good.. I was hitting my keyboard and cursing because this was the last chapter!. MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!

Absolitely genious, please please keep this comming. I'll be waiting anxiously, as Im sure a ton of people will be :)

I am really enjoying reading this story. I like the idea of Sasuke being with Hinata. I also think you portrayed the characters well. I don't find Sasuke out of character. Time has past, he's dealt with Itachi, and had time to reconcile his inner turmoil. That's the immpression I get. Also, if anyone were to bring out the soft part of Sasuke it would be Hinata. She possesses such a sweet innocent disposition. Sasuke killed his captors quickly, but if he wouldn't have, then he wouldn't be an Uchiha. After all, he did kill Itachi; he's a force to be reckoned with. If he would have had a really difficult time with them it would have diminished his capabilities. Anyway, you're doing everything great. I find no fault with any of it. I would recommend this to anyone.

Wow, this story is so good! Please update soon! ^_^

update soon!!

I love your approach to this fanfic, it seems well thought out with a good plot. I also LOVE Sasuke/Hinata pairings. Please update soon? I'm hooked!
-Sarah

Well, I liked this story a lot. Even if Sasuke and Hinata adapted a bit too quickly to an arranged marriage, the procedure looked natural nonetheless. It's just that they were a bit too eager to make it work. Sasuke is a bit too sweet, but since it's for Hinata's sake, I don't care.

HIASHI MUST DIE!! Why can't he leave other people well alone? I'm not clear why Tsunade was so in for the arrangement. She was a bit of a jerk in the first chapter.

I liked that Sasuke was able to freed himself. Even if he killed his captors a bit too easily (if they knew some jutsus, they couldn't be common bandits), I liked that you changed from the usual 'a rescue team appears' scheme that 95% kidnapping stories use. Plus he's an Uchiha, after all.

Ah I was so glad, and surprised, to see you'd updated this fic (= I am enjoying your other works, but I'm particularly fond of Sasuke and had worried you'd abandoend this fic. I was a bit surprised you had Sasuke escape so quickly, but you wrote it well and there is still his travels home. Reminds me of Odysseus (= And probably Ichiro and Kane weren't alone in knowing Itachi, so he might have more thugs to deal with. Look forward to more!

I'm So glad you updated! This story is one of my favorites! Excellent Chapter! Update Soon Please!

this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I love the charecter inteaction and the writing style. I really wan't to read what happens next! I'm as torn up by this as Hinata... almost. Also I'm not pregnant. This story gets a solid 8.5/10, I think it would be perfect if it were completely in charecter (with sasuke), but then the story wouldn't be possible. Oh well, it's a great read anyway. Please update soon (as of june 19)!

This is, by far, my new FAVORITE Sasuke/Hinata fanfic. I love how you described their relationship because this story is SOOO... believable. I can't wait to find out who was preventing their pregnancy. Keep up the EXCELLENT work. Once again, love the story!