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for How to say thank you

by Trollmia

person dk_joynotsignedin
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful - well-written. It was sweet and yummy. I like how he says thank you...
person Kim
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute!
person cyzay
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot. I love the employing of his shadow jutsu (can't think of it's proper name at the moment). Very well written and great characterization. Simply awsome!
person lg
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was outright steamy.
person Leech
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll repay the favor ... :)

I'm kind of curious if you would write anything more like this one ... I know it's hard work and I have to say that I'm really surprised about the way you make them act out. It's rather ... fluffy. I still love it though :)

So, to you goes the same ... write another one. I'll be doing the same ;)

Leech
person Celen
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute so cute so cute cute omg.

KRHM. Yep, I liked it. Oh well, I loved it. ^^ ShikaTema is my favourite Naruto-pairing, soo... And your writing skills are unbeatable. I'd rate this 10 stars if I could.
person blueinferno
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* thank you so much! i love shikamaru! and theres so little with him in!! again, good writing style i dont know how you do it! but ya got me!!
person ShikasShadow
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That's all I can say! That was awesome! Even though I'm against the Shika/Temari angle (SHIKAMARU IS MINE! lol), that was a great read! The descriptions were kick-ass. I like how he used his shadow bind no jutsu to get her to take her own shirt off in the end. That was cool. Everything was so detailed, I could almost feel everything Temari felt. (Which felt good. lol). Keep writing! You've got quite a talent for lemons. Let me know if you write more!!!!
person Black-Draco
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work! Nice story you've made there :D
person The Gandhara
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite good. I just think Temari was a tad too hesitant, when she's the kind of woman that never beats around the bush.