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for Quicksand

by sorviball

person ky0kichi
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiii. I love NejixGaara! So awesome. That's right Gaara, you tell Neji! Maybe He;ll stop acting so stuuuupid :oooo

^___^ Update soon onegai :P
person eyes0nme19
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally an update...I so love your story, looking forward to more I hope?
person Name
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i heart you , thanks for actually going back to this story after like one banjillion years for neglecting it not many authors do that you have great writting skills please continue i really do look forward to read this story to the end and i want a longer chapter please <-- i ask nicely too i said please
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! *GASP*!! YAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! FINALLY A NEJI/GAARA FIC THAT ISNT JUST A ONE-SHOT! HOOPPLLLAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, And I LOVE IT!!
person Serenia
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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I think this is the BEST story I have ever read! I only came across it tonight, but DAMN! You're a decent writer! :)
There were a couple of grammatical errors back around the lemon - I think a missed word or two, but it wasn't very noticeable. I don't think you're being too OOC, for all that they are in quite a different scenario than in the anime.
I definately look forward to reading more, and I wish AFF had update notification!
person blisblop
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tell him Gaara.Neji,you cheap(by making the situation emotionally cheap) bum! Realistic,almost embarressingly so.good stuff.Thank you.
person lo
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!!! you are a great story teller. Hey, take your time for the next chapter, if it takes that long to put out good chapter like that, then so what. Keep up the good work.
person Trisha
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I really really like this fic ^__^
person eyes0nme19
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story! neji and gaara is something you dont read about everyday...thats why its so good. Keep up the good work!
person the_loud_monk
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some odd, sad reason I'm thinking about the cab and how pissed the guy driving it must feel. If only he/she knew what the person was really doing! LOL What a waste of gas! XD

I love this! It's sexy and awesome, and I want some more. NejiGaa is so hot. <3