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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this. will there be more? i have to say, after spending many days reading one friggin fruits basket story, this is a nice change of pace. and i just love the way you have neji in there^_^V
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*got her daily yaoi hardcore quota well met*
Awsome sex scene, and commentry. Hilarious, in fact.
The ending was amusing, to say the least, and I'd like to see a continuation with Sasuke and Naruto. Or a whole new fic. Just write more, okay?
I love your style. Really.^^
Until I see more [and if I don't I'll throw a waterballon at you AND it'll hit],
Ja ne~
Awsome sex scene, and commentry. Hilarious, in fact.
The ending was amusing, to say the least, and I'd like to see a continuation with Sasuke and Naruto. Or a whole new fic. Just write more, okay?
I love your style. Really.^^
Until I see more [and if I don't I'll throw a waterballon at you AND it'll hit],
Ja ne~
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, I love Gaara and I love Gaara/Naruto pairings even more! So yay to you for making my week w. such a superb story.
Second I would like to comment on this sentence: "Not even a sinful god had ever sounded more deliciously becoming." OMG! I love that sentence! Being the person so completely in love with words as I am, I simply drooled over this sentence. And now that I have fully displayed my dorkyness, I'll continue onwards.
The Neji tortue was quite funny. I feel that you really captured Naruto's fun side, and truly what he would go through when faced w. all the tiring paper and diplomatic work a Hokage is forced to deal with. It was hilarious. And of course, Gaara was quite sexy, sexy! He does seem like a person that would go commando. Though I have to question if he would allow Naruto be seme so easily but then again, it's hard to figure out who would be seme in that position, they both are very strong guys, but I guess Naruto does have the stronger personality.
I love the addition of Sasuke at the end, it was cute. Are you planning on continuing on with this fic, or just leaving it as is? It would work either way really. Though if you brought Sasuke into this picture, how would Gaara feel, if anything? Oooh, the drama!
Anyway, I love this fic and I'm glad someone was intrigued by the pairing enough to write a completely AWESOME fic about them! Brilliant, simply brilliant. That's the only thing that can be summed up at the end, you did such a damn good job of bringing all the characters together in a way that makes you really believe they are who they are supposed to be (in other words, in character)! Great job again!
Until Next Time...
Scottishfae
Second I would like to comment on this sentence: "Not even a sinful god had ever sounded more deliciously becoming." OMG! I love that sentence! Being the person so completely in love with words as I am, I simply drooled over this sentence. And now that I have fully displayed my dorkyness, I'll continue onwards.
The Neji tortue was quite funny. I feel that you really captured Naruto's fun side, and truly what he would go through when faced w. all the tiring paper and diplomatic work a Hokage is forced to deal with. It was hilarious. And of course, Gaara was quite sexy, sexy! He does seem like a person that would go commando. Though I have to question if he would allow Naruto be seme so easily but then again, it's hard to figure out who would be seme in that position, they both are very strong guys, but I guess Naruto does have the stronger personality.
I love the addition of Sasuke at the end, it was cute. Are you planning on continuing on with this fic, or just leaving it as is? It would work either way really. Though if you brought Sasuke into this picture, how would Gaara feel, if anything? Oooh, the drama!
Anyway, I love this fic and I'm glad someone was intrigued by the pairing enough to write a completely AWESOME fic about them! Brilliant, simply brilliant. That's the only thing that can be summed up at the end, you did such a damn good job of bringing all the characters together in a way that makes you really believe they are who they are supposed to be (in other words, in character)! Great job again!
Until Next Time...
Scottishfae
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, that was great!!! A wonderful idea, and quite well done.....oh, and I loved the ending, btw. *totally agrees wih you about the Sasuke thing* ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Oh, and feel free to write a sequel........Sasuke's reaction was just too promising to let it go, lol! Ja ne!!!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this piece! You made Naruto Hokage and managed to keep him believably in character! The smut was, of course, utterly smexy- none of the weirdeness you occasionally get in smut pieces with awkward phrases and terminology. And the bit with Sasuke? Brilliant!! I laughed so hard!! Keep up the good work!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. I really loved it. Thank you.
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome awesome awesome! you're amazing! please update super fast!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, this was fucking awsome! keep up the good work
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FAbulous! Just fabulous! espcially the last part about Sasuke, that was a little hilarious! I can't believe Neji was not enjoying the 'show'!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very entertaining