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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say I agree with you about Sasuke. And I would love to see either a sequel or additional chapter with sasunaru, since the last part of the story seemed to allude to an eventual relationship between them. Anyway, I really enjoyed this story... it was well-written and fun to read. :p I particularly liked the end... Naruto teasing Neji about watching him and Gaara, and Neji and Sasuke's reactions to what had just happened... ^^
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell, that was really hot...gotta love the last line. ^_^ Please say there will be more chapters!!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I pray this isn't a oneshot... Care to continue?
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of the Kazekage and Hokage screwing. XD
When I think about it, it's surprising that this is the first fic I've seen like this!
I love the GaaNaru pairing, and this was a great smutty fic for it.
~Sam
When I think about it, it's surprising that this is the first fic I've seen like this!
I love the GaaNaru pairing, and this was a great smutty fic for it.
~Sam
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and very sexy, you kept their character which is very wonderful, since you don't find a lot of in-character stories. Also, I ADORE Naruto as seme and I like it even better when he's dominating Gaara (which you can barely find, and it's ever rarer to find one that's written so good). Uke Gaara is priceless ^^ Thank you so much for a wonderful fic, I hope you'll post more NaruGaa fics in the future :D
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Too funny! LMAO! Shikamaru escaping the Hokage with cleverly timed naps! LOL. And the last bit with Sasuke was AWESOME! I totally agree... the man is gay. And he wasnt Naruto's ass in a BAD way. PLEASE write a sequel about Sasu/Naru. That would be AWESOME!!!
~NUDD~
~NUDD~
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* YUM!!! I wanna see a sequal with Sasuke. And maybe Naruto should be the one with the limp in the end *snickers* I wanna see a SEQUAL DAMMIT!!!
~Rainy
~Rainy
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew! Damn. And it just screams sequel too. Limping Sasuke... *runs for tissues*
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLOL! Oh my gods! That was f-ing hysterical!!!!! Gaara's reaction to Naru-chan liking the attention was so fabulously well done! And Gaara doesn't wear anything under his coat or pants? Now I'm getting naughty naughty images! ... okay, so they were there already. And poor Neji-kun! ~pats his head~ Awww! I felt really really *really* amused by his train of thought. And the ending? f-ing funny!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love you. That was the funniest NaruGaa story I've read so far. I hope you're making this into a multi-chapter fic, but if not its still frigin' awesome!!!!! Love Peace and Chicken Grease!!!!!!!! XD