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more more more... i love them together.. i have read one other story with them.. well really that is all i have found so far but i do so love them together.. please if you could e-mail me when you update i would love you forever really....

Miki

Dude sooooo intrested in this cuppel!!! I love Shimkamaru and Temari they are like my favrit cuppole. You MUST continue!

i really love these couples. i really don't know why but, i think you should continue doing this. can you please continue this?

Yes I like this couple alot and I like what you have so far. It's light and sweet. I like your style so please continue

Kiiii~! Finally, another ShikaTem fic! X3;; I'm a big ShikaTem fan, so you can imagine the frusteration spent on finding anything like this. Yes, please continue. There aren't nearly as many of these as there should be.

I liked it. Keep it up.

please continue

Of course you should continue... I would love to read more of this story.
And the pairing is just sizzling.. :)

Yes, you should totally continue this story ~^-^~ I love Shikmaru and Temari, they are just the cutest couple ever, and you them really well too =D (although Temari was a bit OOC)

It'd be nice if you kept the POV consistent, and you jumped a couple of scenes without tying them together properly. If you'd sorted those out and had taken your time and expanded on the ideas you had here, I think you'd have had a real winner going on here. The characterization was great, the tone of the fic was really nice and all and all I know I'll be checking out the next chapter if you put it out. But if you want to make it memorable, I'd recommend you work on those tidbits a little and not be afraid of making longer chapters :D I think you have the talent to write really well if you work a little more.

Good luck!