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December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gawd, that's good and I'm not even half way through.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaa.. im sure you think its wierd getting a review for this so long after its been updated..but i just found this even though ive been on this site for at least a year *shock*.. i cannot believe i missed this.
OMMMGGGG... this is one of the best naruto fics ever!! i know i havent read the last two chapters yet but its really late and im sleepy and i wanted to review today.. ill prolly leave another review after i finsih the 7th but anyway...
wow, i am amazed at the brilliance of your writing. its simple, with none of the sugary flowery adverb-y fics that most of the authors ( including me to some extent, lol) subject everyone too. its a breath of fresh air that im grateful for coming across.
i love how you made Sakura so much in character.. though she does come across as a little cry baby ish but its totally understandable..and im wondering whther you wrote this before shipuuden? i dont understand how people can made her evil to Naruto in their fics.. though i suppose its creative licence.
Sasuke is a bastard..but thats how we all love him. the Kyuubi interaction with him was HAWWT. im really looking fwd to that smut. *giggles*
and Naruto.. you've captured him perfectly. i felt my heart clench with the whole council, orphan thing. sniff. someone really needs to take care of him too.. and sakura and sasuke are the perfect ones.
anyway, before i scare you (and myself) with the length of this, i shall sign off.
OMMMGGGG... this is one of the best naruto fics ever!! i know i havent read the last two chapters yet but its really late and im sleepy and i wanted to review today.. ill prolly leave another review after i finsih the 7th but anyway...
wow, i am amazed at the brilliance of your writing. its simple, with none of the sugary flowery adverb-y fics that most of the authors ( including me to some extent, lol) subject everyone too. its a breath of fresh air that im grateful for coming across.
i love how you made Sakura so much in character.. though she does come across as a little cry baby ish but its totally understandable..and im wondering whther you wrote this before shipuuden? i dont understand how people can made her evil to Naruto in their fics.. though i suppose its creative licence.
Sasuke is a bastard..but thats how we all love him. the Kyuubi interaction with him was HAWWT. im really looking fwd to that smut. *giggles*
and Naruto.. you've captured him perfectly. i felt my heart clench with the whole council, orphan thing. sniff. someone really needs to take care of him too.. and sakura and sasuke are the perfect ones.
anyway, before i scare you (and myself) with the length of this, i shall sign off.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! ^-^
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was is a great story. you took parts of the story that were not explained in the manga and made it huge. explaining the seal on naruto was very smart but , it was an awsome story.
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What did a nice, respectable, barely seventeen-year-old girl tell her parents when she decides to shack up with two guys, one of whom - no clue which - got her pregnant?
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ahh!! it was all goo at the end. great job, i loved this, every word, and now i'll read the sequels!!~
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ahh!! it was all goo at the end. great job, i loved this, every word, and now i'll read the sequels!!~
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Sure, okay, he's pretty to look at, but my dick would freeze and fall off if it went within a meter of his ass. He's even more of an icy bitch than you are."
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aww... i liked this chapter. sasuke falling asleep was cute, i have to say. i'm loving this, and so won't delay myself and read the next chapter!!~
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aww... i liked this chapter. sasuke falling asleep was cute, i have to say. i'm loving this, and so won't delay myself and read the next chapter!!~
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How utterly -- rude!"
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"... I see the wild, untamed wench would fit the theme better..."
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"It's the woman who's given away, you -- cretin!!"
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We'll spring you out, burn the Council house down, and move to another village."
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oh, that was great.... okay, last chapter, and then it's to bed with me!! ... or maybe i'll read it tomorrow...~
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"... I see the wild, untamed wench would fit the theme better..."
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"It's the woman who's given away, you -- cretin!!"
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We'll spring you out, burn the Council house down, and move to another village."
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oh, that was great.... okay, last chapter, and then it's to bed with me!! ... or maybe i'll read it tomorrow...~
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved the beastiality comments between naruto and kyuubi
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decided not to think at all while he hunted, because he'd just run face first into a tree.
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they both saw him wince discretely and 'misplace' his food down the tree
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... um... great chapter. i'm kinda scared... kyuubi's being crazy, not that he ISN'T crazy, and he's driving naruto coo-coo!! not cool, fox, not. cool. anyway, imma read the next chapter!!~
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decided not to think at all while he hunted, because he'd just run face first into a tree.
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they both saw him wince discretely and 'misplace' his food down the tree
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... um... great chapter. i'm kinda scared... kyuubi's being crazy, not that he ISN'T crazy, and he's driving naruto coo-coo!! not cool, fox, not. cool. anyway, imma read the next chapter!!~
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why was she bothering to think about the softness of Sasuke's hair when she was supposed to think about WHY THE HELL SHE WAS NAKED IN BED WITH SASUKE AND NARUTO?? Okay, being in bed with Sasuke was her dream, but what was that stupid, crazy blond ... hunk... /wow, nice shoulders- wait, scratch that, nice ASS/- ack!!! What the hell was she thinking about? That was Naruto, not some piece of eyecandy
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/And with our pussy hurting as if we'd tried to ride a fucking kangaroo in a rodeo-/
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okay, so yeah... the first time i posted this review, it cut it off, so i go again... i'm reveiwing as i read, and i'm randomly inserting the best quotes, so... bear with me. this was a great chapter, and i'm all excited about this. i've already read the prequel thing that shows the night before, and that was HOT. thanks for writing.~
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/And with our pussy hurting as if we'd tried to ride a fucking kangaroo in a rodeo-/
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okay, so yeah... the first time i posted this review, it cut it off, so i go again... i'm reveiwing as i read, and i'm randomly inserting the best quotes, so... bear with me. this was a great chapter, and i'm all excited about this. i've already read the prequel thing that shows the night before, and that was HOT. thanks for writing.~
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He was fucking ogling Uzumaki Dead-Last Naruto.
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especially not the waking-up-after-a-good-hard-fuck kind of naked
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And it didn't matter if Naruto's eyes were red or blue or fucking gold with pink polka dots.
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AAAAAAH!!! that was a... i don't know, kinda deppressing, but i totally saw the pregnancy thing coming, sorta 2nd chapter!!! i don't know what to THINK!!! ... i guess i'll chapter three then.~
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especially not the waking-up-after-a-good-hard-fuck kind of naked
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And it didn't matter if Naruto's eyes were red or blue or fucking gold with pink polka dots.
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AAAAAAH!!! that was a... i don't know, kinda deppressing, but i totally saw the pregnancy thing coming, sorta 2nd chapter!!! i don't know what to THINK!!! ... i guess i'll chapter three then.~