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He suppressed a smirk when his teammate only managed about thirty of them. He would so tease him later
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okay! great chapter three too! i really wanna see what happens, but! it is time to sleep. school tomorrow... damn, i have a test...~

ah that was so CUUUUTE ^_^ i absolutely adore sakura but she kinda pissed me off near the beginning when she didn't want to keep the baby..but then i thought of how i would feel if i got pregnant this young and i was like nyuuu >.< so i forgave her lol. and i LOVE the way you portrayed her, excellent. ah i love team 7 threesomes sooo much :) because i want sakura with sasuke because i couldn't imagine sasuke with any other chick (and also none of them deserve him... bleh, and they're ADORABLE together!!) but i also feel so sorry for naruto and i want him to finally get her after all those years of unrequitted love... and they're also adorable together. so this solves it perfectly!! :D i haven't read the sequal yet but the idea of sakura and sasuke getting married kind of scares me because i don't want poor naruto-kun to get left out :( *tear lol. but since they're gonna live together... yay.

i thought the characters were really well done and in character and all that jazz


and i just wanted to say I LOVE yOU!!! definitely my new favorite fic. perfect amount of romance and angst and humor and umm sexual reference? lol. it was just amazing.

oh oh oh!! and i also love the sasunarusasu can't forget that..because c'mon how can they care about each other that much without LOVIN each other, eh? eh? hahah so that's why team 7 threesomes are perfect ^_^

LOVE ITTT!!!

You guys don't like Sakura don't you?? well I don't want to tell you how to write your story so don't get offensive of what I say cause I'm not trying to tell you to do it just to listin(or read) but Sakura understands Naruto as well, and the 9-tails will not go into a new container, that requires another seal, he will just be free from any seal and even if he caused Sakura to be pregnete then Sakura is carrying the baby not the 9-tails and if she is then the 9-tails would be trannsfering himself using sex and that means Sasuke would hol a bit of nine_tails too and that means the 9-tails chakra will be visiblein Sasuke and sakura and Hinata or Neji can spot it and kill those parts of the nine-tails

ok forget wat I said and oh yeah LLOOVVEEE ITTTT!!! YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITEER!

LLLOO0VVVEEE ITTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LLLLOOOOVVVVEEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU!!! :cheers and bounces around hyperly: You just gave me a new favorite pairing. :grins: I never really thought about those three together before, though I do admit to reading quite a bit of SasuNaru. But, yeah. This pairing/group, whatever is just...:grins: It makes so much sense to me, it's kinda scary. XD

I just read this in one shot and first I'd like to applaud you for all the time you spent writing this. Those chapters were long, but wonderful. The reviews must be gone, but I saw the notes about people freaking out with the pairings. I actually can relate to that, I didn't want to read this since one of my greatest fears is Naruto losing Sasuke to Sakura (so actually the lack of reconnecting the Naruto/Sasuke relationship made me sad only in the last two chapters when I thought he changed his mind about being more interested in Naruto) but that's no bother, and definitely not a criticism. I wonder if you really even need the epilogue? I mean this story was absolutely fabulous from beginning to end, and the way you managed to juggle three very interesting characters all at once and shift to different points of view--you must have unbelievable talent. And the story was so engaging that I agree about what people said about this being a possible arc in the actual storyline. The details were just great, and I forget if you had a beta or not but either you or you and your beta deserve some serious kudos because those chapters were pretty much flawless. I'll be sure to send the word out to the more close minded SasuNaru/NaruSasu fans, because I thought I could read this after I read Foxplay (which is probably the best NaruSasu I've ever read) so I trusted you that you wouldn't break my heart with this story. (Am I getting too into this)? But seriously, up until chapter 6, I thought you expressed a stronger bond in the Naruto/Sasuke relationship than some fanfics completely devoted to just them. And who can deny that our Naruto hasn't had feelings for Sakura... half the high school AU fics start in a manner where Naruto is hitting on Sakura before he ever moves to Sasuke.

Bah, it's just like three men and a little baby except Steve Gutenberg is replaced by Sakura. And they're all ninjas. Can't there just be two daddies and Kakashi is the godfather? I can't wait to start reading your sequel to this. OMG and please feel free to write more narusasu (you are absolutely AMAZING at those).
Yeah, and don't worry about those other bastards telling you how to write your story... aren't there enough stories with their pairings out there already that they can just bury their heads in those? seriously. great job. but i do hope in the sequel that naruto and sasuke shag like they promised they would, ne?