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for Teamwork - Foxplay

by Askerian

schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now that was.. holy hell.. h.o.t!
love it to bits! hehe ^_^
person Candelabra
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... wow. That was, um. Well. It was.

Fantastic, I think, is the only word I can think of...

I especially liked the image of Sasuke laughing when Kyuubi first pushed him onto the ground. And the whole idea of him being fucked into the ground was just love. I like Sasuke best when he's made to be an uke...

Anyway, it was very good. I'm glad that I got to read this.
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice :) now if only i wasn't addicted to scenes like this ><

Gotta say my favorite line is the last line with Kurenai draggin Kakashi off to get the "details"
person animelover
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this has got to be the BEST kyuusasu fic i have read .. there's not many, but this was hilarious! and ino being clueless was the BOMB!!! could you do a sequel so we could watch naru get in trouble for his "deal"? drop me a line if you do one! ;-)
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that and he was naked up in a tree
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what with Neji being a homicidal maniac persuaded that Hinata-sama must be protected from everything
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"You're standing in my sun, bitch,"
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alright!! great job, once aGAIN!!! i love this little series, and i'll read number 2, or whatever it is, now...~
person a;ljskgfb;kanf
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eheh, shmexy!!!
person blacknoise
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMMMMMM GRRRR

That was hot and excellent and wild and delicious. A great sidestory. Naru(Kyuubi)/Sasu at its very finest.
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
" Down, bitch."

Yep...that pretty much made the whole story for me!

I truly hope Hinata enjoyed her view.
person hunnn
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luvedd this SOOOOO muchhh!!! It was really graet, completely smutty;) I don't supposed you could be persuaded to write a sequel to this lol?
person Tokitoh
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very good. Especially the characterization. And I like how you made Kyuubi chase Sasuke. Because, really, I hate situations when Kyuubi is almighty and can do everything and nothing can stop it blahblahblah. Great fic. Really. Great. Great. Great. *loop = infinity*