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for Lace and Strawberries

by Askerian

person Saer
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...I can't believe how much i enjoyed this fic, and how much that sasukes alternate personality (Can I even call it that) actually made sense to read. I hope there are more installments to the Saki-chan Universe! SAER
person viciouscallisto
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! sasuke-kun is fucked up!! i'm glad that naruto is there it help him. i really liked the last chapter. it sparks some sense of hope that sasuke-kun won't feel the need to become seki-chan and that naruto does love him. are you gonna write any more chapters? you should. i love this wonderfully messed up universe!
person lost complex
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I first found this awesome fic on mediaminer, and I'm glad to see it growing and developing well... I really enjow the way you portrait Narutos's thought on how messed up is Sasuke, and wonder if there will be another chapter from Sasuke POV. How he copes with this whole divided personas thing....I can't imagine how he just goes from psycotic Sasuke to Saki-chan, does he manages to deceive himself so well, and that crucial moment from chap 1 when he shows up at Naruto's all dressed up....how he came to that point, and finally how will he cope with the fact that he's Naruto's lover, one can lie to themselves so far....I must say this is one of the best fics, even in it's shortness, it's fluid in its narration and the theme is unusual, with great depth....Please continue.
person MeLaiya
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaawww that was so sweet...in a sick twisted sort of way. Loved it reguardless though. Keep up the good work
person sizzle
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo, i like how this story keeps developing, i really loved the forbidden aspect of it with people so close, but i loved this last chapter where sasu is becoming more comfortable with himself and saki and how naru is there to reconcile and heal them, lol
person lje
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you decide to write more.
person Enkidu
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Reads that note on the bottom and snickers* Hell, I'd be willing to write Sasuke cross-dressing as an adult. That's be very hot, indeed. Just need the permission and some free time from homework >_>
person lstdpnthght
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good... but Naruto's not THAT perverted XD;
person Sasuke Fangirl #343
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why but this just REEKS angst...
person The_Yaoi_Fairie
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! Here is my love! I give it to you, all wrapped up in frilly ruffles!! It is still a little dirty and bloody from the KyuuSasu fic, but I give it to you nonetheless!!!