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for Sick Days

by Pin

person vampchic
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to see what naruto has planned for sasuke.XD hope there good!!
also want to know why he was so sick in the first place. and why the kyuuby is acting the way that he is.
yup, you are holding my interest. update soon. want to read more.
person kai
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting, is naruto gonna fake sick, so he can find out what sauske is hiding? XDD he should do it!! update soon!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*doesn't know whether to hug you for updating (finally, lol) or hit you for ending the chapter with a cliffy* ...........grrrrr................ *sigh* I give up -- it just takes too much effort to be upset with you..........expecially after such an awesome chapter!!! ^____^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Oh, and just a theory: is Naruto feeling better because he has decided to do something about his relationship wioth Sasuke? *shrugs* Just a thought......... ^^ Ja ne!!!
person lo
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tease. I like this a lot. Keep up the good work!
person evil
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Naruto pondering over his feelings for Sasuke? *Grins widely* Hell yeah!! Gawd, you rock!! This is a very interesting story, if I do say so meself! ^__^ Continue the gewd work and PLEASE update soon! ^________^
person Puchu
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaah! greatness~!! please continue soon~!!

oh, and if you want some constructive criticism, which I suck at, you might want to look at the changing of tenses. Sometimes, it goes a bit hay-wire-y from past to present. but maybe I'm just to tired to understand it properly... ^^; 40 km on a bike followed by a bit lack of sleep can do that to you.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter -- keep up the good work!!!
person k
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, it's so sweet! I love the getting together type fics. Looking forward to more. ^_^
person silverfox
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person hogo-chan
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww... the end part was so sad! But I really liked this chapter! It was so cute! Great job! Please update fast!