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for Sick Days

by Pin

person pixiequeen
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I can only imagine what could "go wrong" when Sasuke is looking after him
person Pin
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks everyone for the wonderful reviews! Don't worry ^__^ All your questions shall be answered. I already have three chapters written and they are being edited right now...I will release one every Saturday. And if I get into a writing frenzy...maybe more than that lol (tho classes are picking up...so I am thinking one a week is pretty good.) I will explain the last mission, ages, and Naruto's illness as the story progresses. I like to keep people wondering...I think I get that evil habit from all the manga I read ^__^ Oh well.

THANKS AGAIN FOR THE REVIEWS! Next Chapter will be released soon!~
person hogo-chan
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! update fast! ^_^
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! *does the "I'm-so-happy-and-yet-acting-like-an-idiot-because-I'm-also-sick" dance* ^^ OMG, this fic rocks!!! What a neat idea!!! *sly grin* Naru-kun is in "rut", isn't he??? *even more sly and now slightly evil grin* Poor, poor Sasu-kun.......whatever will happen to him, I wonder? ^___~ keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!
person sara chan
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, this story is really good, you should keep the updates coming and keep the chapters long! arigato!
person JadeTiger
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad, a good start to it.. wish there was a bit more detail in things like the events leading upto naruto's sickness. IT seemed you dwelled a bit on kakashi explaining the mission they had the day before saying that nothing happened. but with out reading that mission itself makes it feel as if something is missing. hmm kinda hard explaining what i mean. ;P

it seemed a tine bit rushed, just a tine tine bit, and i can understand why:P who don't wanna skip the bland stuff and get right to the sasu/naru fun? lol

i give this a 8 out of 10. very good and hope to see more soon!
person Ezj
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written and very intresting.
My my what can Naruto have got.
Waiting for more.
=^_^=
person ghostninja85
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start. You have gotten my attention.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person T.K-kun
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto vulnerable, Sasuke's crush, they're both at his house.... UPDATE SOON! XD good job, i really enjoyed the first cahpter it's a good base to the story.
person Sukara
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! ^_^ I csn't wait to see what happens..and what does Sasuke eman that he burried those feeling along tme ago? *Ish confuzed* .-.