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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far this is great!! I love how you have set up the story. This is just overall good writting. Please Please Please do not do what other people do and make naruto a whiney stupud idiot, he deserves more credit than that. But your story now is just rocking hard!!! So keep up the good work!!!!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking good,i hooked.How old are they?...buried them a long time ago...made me wonder.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic sounds very promising – it didn’t suck at all! Yay you! Of course, only 1 chapter so far...but I hope you continue this...soon!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is fic surely is looking promising!
i like your style of writing.
What's wrong with Naruto? hope its not sth bad...
I like how Sasuke is like in your fic... whats that feeling he is habouring for -his- Naruto ^__^? i m eager to find out how this turn out!
i like your style of writing.
What's wrong with Naruto? hope its not sth bad...
I like how Sasuke is like in your fic... whats that feeling he is habouring for -his- Naruto ^__^? i m eager to find out how this turn out!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice story! Update soon!