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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually not one for PWP, but you had me from the first line... well, first couple of lines.
I'm also not a huge advocate of NaruSasu (preferring to stick with SasuNaru) BUT, like i said, you had me from the first line. I haven't read a decently written fic of any type recently that's kept Naruto reasonably in character.
I loved it. Every bit of it, despite that Naruto WAS slightly rough. But all can be excused. I'll never see their curse seals in the same way again. It was absolutely hot. Especially Naruto. And the last three lines.
I'm also not a huge advocate of NaruSasu (preferring to stick with SasuNaru) BUT, like i said, you had me from the first line. I haven't read a decently written fic of any type recently that's kept Naruto reasonably in character.
I loved it. Every bit of it, despite that Naruto WAS slightly rough. But all can be excused. I'll never see their curse seals in the same way again. It was absolutely hot. Especially Naruto. And the last three lines.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This is fantastic. =^^= hehehehe.. yummy!
I really liked the passion and need that this story captures. The teasing of each others seals is definitely a wonderful element to the story. (Who knew cursed seals have a plus side, eh?) Great piece of story telling. Keep up the good work!
I really liked the passion and need that this story captures. The teasing of each others seals is definitely a wonderful element to the story. (Who knew cursed seals have a plus side, eh?) Great piece of story telling. Keep up the good work!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Rough, but nice. It'll definitely get mouths watering. ^^
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was so CUTE! ^_^ and you said its OCC but it seems pretty in character to me =)
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@_@ wow. i never thought that was possible... i mean, to start from their.. curse seals... but wow that was HOT. good job, you do wonderful smut. love your writing.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How:
Juvenile (making me feel pervy! I used to be that age..er fairly recently)
but mostly kinky and sexy.
They are such...boys.
Great fic
Juvenile (making me feel pervy! I used to be that age..er fairly recently)
but mostly kinky and sexy.
They are such...boys.
Great fic
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Damn, I'm good. I only had to lick your seal once. You had to give me head. You should work on your endurance."
naruto couldn't have said it better~ ;p
naruto couldn't have said it better~ ;p
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha. Hot.
Also clever, and rather well written. *lopsided grin*
Also clever, and rather well written. *lopsided grin*
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Best...Story...Ever... Oh... My... God...
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awws. xD I loved that. It was just....I think it's the most in character naruto smut ever. xD BRILLIANT!