rate_review Reviews

This.

I really liked this.

I especially love how the aspects of this fanfiction--the dominance, the sexuality, none of it was full-blown. It was all apparent and appreciated. Mentions of love weren't mentioned, but neither were there hints of casual sex. It just existed.

Also, thanks for making my day suck much less. The curse seal thing? I loved that. I haven't read anyone taking that into account before and playing with it like you did. I'm impressed and I feel kinda refreshed.

I recommend this to others.

The only thing that I'd ask for you to fix would be the tenses--it's generally smoother to read if it's in past tense, like "he splattered all over his face" rather than "he splatters all over his face". Also, the space between paragraphing is visually distracting from the story, so I suggest that you shrink those spaces a bit more.

Great work, though. :D

You just KNOW they're gonna break down and have a hot little encounter someday. Juuuust like that. Yeeeessss....

AND ZOMG...seal!kink! Just, augh, *fan fan* it was DAMN hot!

That was really good! I liked the aggressiveness between the two. Well done!

You know, at first when they were comparing and getting "close" to the seals I thought, "this is kinda corny"... but then... OMG, that was HOT!!! No corny, just great well-written lemony goodness! I loved it. I really liked the sort of fighting and resistance that kept up between them... the way that they don't kiss, they just wind up doing something like it... and then that last line at the end was absolutely hilarious!! XD

In my five years of fanfiction, I have never actually liked a PWP. The honor, though, goes to you for actually being the first to convince me that in-character (or as in-character as such writing gets) smut can and does exist. Terrific job. Dashing writing style!

This is strange. I really liked this one, and I have no idea why! :) There's an attitude somewhere in there that just makes me go 'yeah!', even though that's not like me. Good work! *throws an enthusiastic thumbs-up*

Wow...this could very well be one of the sexiest narusasu fics i've read. i don't usually read narusasu just because they've been done so much, but you brought something totally new into the mix. you make those seals so incredibely erotic and seductive...hehe, sasuke cumming just because his seal was licked...oh so sexy. your fic was absolutely delicious...i love it. now i'm gonna try to read your fics in french, the language in itself ups to sexiness level. keep up the great work!

Wow...I liked it. Its different than alot of the stories here. Right more!

*glomps you* that was great!

Heheh. "My curse seal is bigger than yours".