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for Best Laid Plans

by Askerian

person mabidiso
schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell that was so perfectly funny! Perfect in every way. Spectacular angsting and hysteria and drunk scene on the bridge - perfect! Hot, hilarious sex at Naruto's place - perfect! Kiba telling Naruto that Sasuke is waaaaaay out of his league and getting his ass kicked by Sasuke - perfect! The pregnancy scare - beyond perfect!
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic Fic, I laughed so hard. Please write more like this one.
person Kitty
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you would do a sequel to this story it just so good....
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, funny! I don't usually read yuri but this was too funny! I think you have a cute idea.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn but I LOVE this story. Especially the yuri part. *drools* I just feel a little bit sad that you never shared Sasuke's revenge with us. I would have SO loved to see their roles reversed with Naruto in the girl role and Sasuke being on top. Any chance you might consider to write that little scene one day? Looking through you other stories I of course noticed that you seem to perfer NaruSasu over SasuNaru, huh? I have to admit I like both, because I both see them as stubborn and proud and they would both have issues to submit to bottom. *grins*
Ah, anyway I just felt the urge to write you this review and tell you how much I appreciate the idea you had here. I am looking very much forward to future writings and artwork (I watch you on deviantart as well and I love your drawings XD).
Best wishes

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\
who you might, eventually remember as pharaohxyuugi from deviantart. XD
person Imagy
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
babe, I seriously think that you should keep going with this story
or make a sequel
It's just too damn good to be left an unattached one-shot
seriously
u_u
person the one
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
funniest....
story.......
ever........
person yaoifansakura
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XDXDXD LOL!
I liked how Sasuke explained his last idea! and the whole girl-thing is well-written (and interestingly confusing because they were still males but it looked like yuri)so..yay!!nice ^_____________^
person mary
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god please add another chappie!!!! my face hurts from laughing!!!
person frank
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
funny