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for Best Laid Plans

by Askerian

person snowecat
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too bad this is a one-shot, I'd love to see where this would lead. What if they both wound up having children, how would they explain it?
person Bishonen
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was...Good...Very I dont know what eles to say excpet two things that I didn't like

1.Tsunade is hot and there should more lots of stories about her

2. I've seen Shino's eyes and he is way better looking than Sasuke ever could be even as a girl
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BEST.

FIC.

EVER.

In the whole entire world. I think I just died laughing. You pwn drunk Sasuke. You pwn dirty use of sexu no jutsu. You pwn everything. Ever. *gives you everything*. Just. Yes. Brilliant. *dead*
person anonymus
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u should continue this its really good
person Sarah
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck, that was hot.
...Oh my god. I almost (*cough*do*cough*) want a sequel... >.> Sasque fucking sexy-no-jutso Naruto.. maybe a bit more female Sasuke on female Naruto..? It's just so incredibly tempting.
person neko nyaa
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well at least thay are both happy.
person ShadowLilly
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, i love it.....moremoremoremore
person Neko-chan
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok...wierd but funny. xD especially the ending. for a second i actually thought you might make sasuke-CHAN pregnant.lol this was a good idea. glad you came up with it. lol it would've taken to long for me too. xD
person Vox
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Asuka, have you ever thought about making a oneshot were Sasuke can nail femNaruto??? Just a simple request from a devoted fan, is all. :3
person losthimagain
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O please update soon O.O !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster