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for Best Laid Plans

by Askerian

person Alex
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually hate yaoi, but I don't have a problem with this... and it's good writing too, so... -gai pose-.
person MOO
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person krickets
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEXY!
thats all i have to say
person Apollonia
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. The. Best. Fic. EVER!!!!!!!! lol That was so fantastic! You should write more of this! Sasuke was being such a girl the morning after. *hugs* Now if only I could find more like this... *searches*
person H.R
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Thus far the most IC and sensible NaruSasu, I think. I wish this were extended. I've yet to see a Naruto MPreg that had Sasuke as the to-be-mom instead of Naruto. I mean, come on, it would be interesting, wouldn't it? *snicker* Awesome.
person lstdpnthght
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was good.. very creative.
person TobiasX
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read one of your fanfics poseted on this site, I look forward even more to the next chapter. PLEASE do a sequel to this or continue Teamwork 2. Brilliantly written, keeps true to the characters (As much as possible on this fic's subject anyway :]). Please keep writing!!
person phoe-chan
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think the only thing i really have to say is--box of condoms inside his dresser drawer? he was already prepared! *whistles*

Excellent fic. I laughed so hard. XD

Phoe-chan the too lazy to login
person The_Yaoi_Fairie
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*screams and shakes you so hard I start shaking too and EXPLODE and take the whole damn room with meeee yarrrghhH!!!!"

THAT WAS THE BEST FREAKING FIC I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!

I was so completely, utterly delighted, amused, ummmm becoming-overwhimed-with-humor-so-I-laughed-verb-form-yeah, every few sentences! Grinning the whole way through, laughing out loud at some points, that was the most delightful thing I've read... either ever or since Hitchhiker's Guide, certainly the longest continuous block of text that gave me infinite joy every word of the way!!! HOLY CRAP I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!! YOU ARE BRILLIANT! ^========^ XD XD XD XD

I was going to copy and paste the sentences/parts that brought me the most joy, but that would have been way too fucking long. XD

I want you to bear my child. We're probably both girls but I have an idea on how we can get around that. ;)

GYAAAHHHH YOU ROCK SO MUCH WORDS CANNOT EXPRESS IT!!! Maybe I will come back a little later after I calm down, I just finished the fic and I am FREAKING THE FUCK OUT! LIKE KYUUBI ON CRACK!!!!!!!!! GHHYYAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!
person macy
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was very fun to read to say the least. it would be so awesome if you'll continue ^^