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for Best Laid Plans

by Askerian

person Cloud_Kitsune
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is there more? please tell me theres more o.o
person Kris
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That...Was just awesome. XD I was in stitches the entire time. You wrote the whole thing very well. *snicker* Any room for a sequel? >>
person atashi dake
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hands down to the author!!! this is definitely one of the best sasunaru fic i have ever read!!! seriously hilarious, and.... woah! really great ;D
person Kusachu
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW... This story is absolutly awesome. Love it completely!! the characters are written perfectly! What else can i say but BRAVO! It would be awesome to see more from this story, but is it too much to ask for? *sigh* I laughed my ass of at the begining...really really funny! The way they interacted with each other was just fucking great! And Naruto got to be the dominant one!!!! YAY!!!! *Squeel!* So yeah....loved it....will dance and shout with glee if you add more to it... Keep churning out the yummy smut! d(^-^)b
person Diane
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God was it good!
I just have this awesome feeling I've just had an orgasm! That is a hell of a story!
I just loved this story, it feels so in character!
I'm too amazed to even think right!
From beginning to the end it's just fun and sexy! And I love the fact that now they will have a long and very very kinky sex life! Ninjas are the best!
Thanks again for this little tour in Wonderland,
Diane.
person Toby
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly amazing! Please continue!
person KiraDouji
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... ROTFL

- Kira Douji
*still dying of laughter*
person JadeTiger
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh NICE!!! I really injoyed that! I really hope you write another chapter to this fic. its good as it is but i'd love to see what sasuke has in mind ;)
person Snnell
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha.. this one is funny! ^^ *huggles* i really enjoy your sasunaru fanfics. so different and interesting to read!
Do keep them rolling in! might ran out of blood.. but hell, i'm not complaining.
person Nekogirl
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You posted over here too. I've been reading your stuff over at MediaMiner but this place will get you more readership. Love your stuff. It's so smexy and the characterization is always right on.

--Nekogirl