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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sex scenes lack detail, characters don't stay in character.... sorry, I don't want to be evil, just trying to help.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is so great!!! Please update when you can! I think that you should make that short little dream sequence come true! xD
Great job! Please UPDATE soon!!!! xD
~Uchiha Sakura
Great job! Please UPDATE soon!!!! xD
~Uchiha Sakura
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey good story though it is short =( <--tear, update soon! there are not enough stories with this couple glad u decided to make one woot
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was 'father' near end typo? Did you mean further?
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh...DAMN.....your fic is so good...and too many....lick me here, lick you there..i'll come inside stuffs...like it..really..anyway...congrats for having such a good fic...hehehe...:)
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tEh hELL... I'vE bEen LurkIng In tHis st0ry 0F y0uRs caUsE tHe pLot sEemed IntErestIng... (thOugh it wiLL s0mehow be sEx and aLL) bUt YOU pLacEd a YAOI... It's jUst... waddaHecK?! maKiNg kakasHi s0mE kInd oF... H0m0sExuaL In sHort a GAY... teH heLL...
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Revenge of the hetro centric reader this reads like.Ummm is Sasuke gonna get involved in a plot here or is he gonna kick his bros twisted ass too?This is a joke right?sasuke still can't take KaKashi//...maybe an AU label would help.My sympathies to your female relative,it seems she will be surrounded with children,that is not bad if thay are all under 14.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE Sasuke and Sakura fics. Please keep it updated! ^_^ Love it just make the chapters a bit longer! Other than that it is pretty good~~
~Love the
Demonicslayer
~Love the
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sufficate her with his mouth and licked her cheek...very cool,I like your playfullness in scenes.I totally missed how they went from pretend to not, but I do have an attention deficit.