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for Waiting is the Hardest Part

by persepolis130

person IREVUNAO
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesome
person Neko-Chan
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot and sexy...yet still has a point ^_^ i like it!
person slayerette0
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I just got the image of some REALLY pissed off Konoha female ninjas, out to kick her ass for messing with their men. It'd be an anti-Temari coalition. XD LOL
person Leech
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mm ... that was a little odd, I have to admit. I don't want to sound mean by saying "Try harder" either though -.-

So, the characters aren't all that off .. I have to say Neji might be a little more stoic than he appears to be in this little ficlet. Oh well, the joys of fantasy. Oh, and you have a little typo in the name of the story (Wating instead of Waiting). I just realized while writing the review. ^^

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person Yumi
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i love the way you make Neji sound so hot! GAAHH! i loved it.
person tsu
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. . that was really hot. Neji is rather bishie isn't he *___* And you don't see a lot of Temari fics. Awesome work.
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*evil grin*

Very much enjoyed. Sorta PWPish compared to Caged, but still very enjoyable. You really should continue, ne? I haven't read any good M/F Shikamaru fics lately (some good M/M ones though). And I really should get a laptop so that I can pass my trainrides in a similar manner... or at least read ^_^