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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, this is pretty hot stuff! I was a little worried about Iruka there for a bit, but it didn't go there. Good tension!
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
COOL!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! I never heard of parents continuing to take baths with there children as they got older. A good tibit to know. I thought for sure that Iruka would sort of freak at the thought of Naruto getting aroused. I kind of liked that he didn't. He's just trying to be as supportive of Naruto as he can be. Hope that you update soon. Cant wait to read more!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it sounds like Sasuke is going to try. Though he obviously has some issues to work through, but hey, this is Sasuke here, of course he's going to have issues! XP I hope that you update soon. Cant wait to read more
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a very cute yet sweet relationship developing between Sasuke and Naruto and I like how it's going. But one of the words is mispelled. "Usura tonkachi" is acutally "Usurutonkachi" with only one "a". Other things you might wanna check is sometimes the spellings.It helps out alot but other things I can say is keep it up.I can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moremoremoremore...heh, I say that a lot^^;; I love this!! Keep it up!!!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was cute!XD i really hope Sasuke gets over his jerkiness.(is that even a word??)
And Naruto really does have a big heart, doesn't he??
update soon!! want to read more!!
And Naruto really does have a big heart, doesn't he??
update soon!! want to read more!!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! i can't say anything more... thanks... more please!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
geeze. sasuke sure can be an ass. letting naruto get his hopes up high like that then making them crash down.
i hope he tries to apologise to naruto for being such a jerk. poor naruto.:(
update soon. want to read more!!
i hope he tries to apologise to naruto for being such a jerk. poor naruto.:(
update soon. want to read more!!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sad! oh my! please update fast! your fic is so awesome and heart warming!