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i cant waite to see more what about you boss (Jiraiya) "more indeed"

Wow, this is very good. Keep it coming; us NaruIno fans can only take so much suspense.

surprised to see this updated. hope there is more. as a oneshot it worked well. if there is more then it could be even better. leaving it as is is not too good though. can't wait if there is more to this story.

That was good. I like this pairing, but I don't see it too often. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
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Its nice to see something other then yaoi. Plus I like the pairing. Look forward to more.

Great story. It's a fave pairing of mine.

That was a cool lemon but i wish you had put alittle more of naruto and what he saw before Ino apeared on the scene :)

Well this was pretty well written, and by that I mean that I read through it without wincing, crying or feeling a bit dumber than before I started. Now the Sex-scene is what I liked best of.... I guess that's supposed to be a "duh", but in a way that I felt how the rest of the time it felt pretty numb. The characters didn't feel real, but more like puppets playing out our twisted desires.... which they are, but I prefer to keep an illusion that they aren't. Also the descriptions feels much more detailed in the smexing action. The way they refer to eachother as -chan and -kun all the time I suppose are affectionate accurate, though it feels a bit odd reading Ino and Naruto calling eachother that. Speaking of odd, her motivations feels odd, unless she's a nympho, I suppose...

And okay, something good, something good.... ah yes, you look like snoopy, and it makes me smile.

Very nicely done. I don't think I have come across many Naruto/Ino, but this one was nicely written and fit well. You did a good job. Thank you

I think I reviewed before, but I stumbled across this.. and this is wild! *woot* Go blondes!