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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Iyah! I love this story! Oh, Kakashi you tease! Poor Sasuke! And Naruto... well, he's an adorable bundle of naïve cuteness! ^^ I've never read a story like this, were you know what's gonna happen yet don't. Very interesting and addicting. I couldn't stop reading till the eleventh chapter! Hehe! Oh, and you disclaimers, on word- hilarious.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your portrayal of Kakashi. Its unique in it's own way, and i truly enjoyed it.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is just too cute! at first i thought it would be angst free, but i was proven wrong pretty quickly, which i don't mind. angst makes fluff all the fluffier. oh, and as to one of your previous a/ns: *takes deep breath and yells...*
I LOVE KAKASHI, TOO!
*has weird deja vu sense that she's said that before...* ^_~
I LOVE KAKASHI, TOO!
*has weird deja vu sense that she's said that before...* ^_~
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh this is a really good story so far! Please hurry and update!! ^_^
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update! PLEASE! I loved it! It is really promising! :) So please update!
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IIIYYAAAA!!-fist opens and closes to resist impending urge to death-glomp!- I love this story....endlessly o-o -dramatic twinkle in background-
I LOVE THE FATHER-SON RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN KAKASHI IRUKA AND NARUTO! Its so kawaii... Ne, Im sorry this review is so emotional, I just, I read the first like..five chapters of this story...a year ago? And since then you've updated so much! and it never showed up on the naruto yaoi page! I mean, you know how when fics are updated they get put up front to read? I never saw yours there! Gah...evilness...
I could have swore I'd reviewed this before...but that must not be the case. I do that sometimes, intend to do something then go off ranting to myself and completely forget -grins sheepishly-.
Im sorry...I know he's not the main character in this, but Kakashi is definately my favorite character in this fic, and Im not too sure why... I usually don't really like Kakashi...but the way you constructed his character is so... more emotional somehow. Not like...-image of Kakashi sobbing and hugging everyone, everyone else screaming in horror and struggling to get away- I mean, we get to look inside his head and he's not just like, watching everyone expressionless! He's watching interactions and smiling and sharing memories and he's together with Iruka.
-sighs blissfully- I do love this fic..and I hope you update soon. Sorry for the ranting, most of it didn't really have to do with constructive criticism that you probably wanted -sweatdrop- I just can't really point out any flaws, I like this story through and through and plus I have a bit of a sentimental tie to this since this was one of the first Naruto yaoi fanfics I ever read -fidgets-
Truck on, Chibi-onna sempai!!! I hope to one day be able to rival your marvelous writing! -bows on floor and feels back crack- owww...
I LOVE THE FATHER-SON RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN KAKASHI IRUKA AND NARUTO! Its so kawaii... Ne, Im sorry this review is so emotional, I just, I read the first like..five chapters of this story...a year ago? And since then you've updated so much! and it never showed up on the naruto yaoi page! I mean, you know how when fics are updated they get put up front to read? I never saw yours there! Gah...evilness...
I could have swore I'd reviewed this before...but that must not be the case. I do that sometimes, intend to do something then go off ranting to myself and completely forget -grins sheepishly-.
Im sorry...I know he's not the main character in this, but Kakashi is definately my favorite character in this fic, and Im not too sure why... I usually don't really like Kakashi...but the way you constructed his character is so... more emotional somehow. Not like...-image of Kakashi sobbing and hugging everyone, everyone else screaming in horror and struggling to get away- I mean, we get to look inside his head and he's not just like, watching everyone expressionless! He's watching interactions and smiling and sharing memories and he's together with Iruka.
-sighs blissfully- I do love this fic..and I hope you update soon. Sorry for the ranting, most of it didn't really have to do with constructive criticism that you probably wanted -sweatdrop- I just can't really point out any flaws, I like this story through and through and plus I have a bit of a sentimental tie to this since this was one of the first Naruto yaoi fanfics I ever read -fidgets-
Truck on, Chibi-onna sempai!!! I hope to one day be able to rival your marvelous writing! -bows on floor and feels back crack- owww...
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why did you stop to update? This story is to good to be left un-done...
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU ROCK!!!
Just read through and finished chapters 1-10... ^^
TT_TT *sniiffles*... that was soo.... wow!
I honestly cried at the end of sacrafice!
GOOD JOB!! ><
yeah... heh hehe...
but anyways on to happier moments....
Jealous Sasuke is sooo great!!
I hope you have more of Kakashi-sensei making Sasuke jealous in the future!
hmm.... Jealous Possesive Sasuke... yum.
^_^
Just read through and finished chapters 1-10... ^^
TT_TT *sniiffles*... that was soo.... wow!
I honestly cried at the end of sacrafice!
GOOD JOB!! ><
yeah... heh hehe...
but anyways on to happier moments....
Jealous Sasuke is sooo great!!
I hope you have more of Kakashi-sensei making Sasuke jealous in the future!
hmm.... Jealous Possesive Sasuke... yum.
^_^
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love your story! Keep up a good work and update soon!