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for Filling the Void

by rachmax007

person YJ
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!This is like the best script yet!!!please update soon! i simply love jealously stuff !!!...hahah
person Jadejj
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh ya following the story line does this mean Sasuke going to be curse?
person kikyou_oneesama
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I promised this review a long time ago, but then, like you, i got sidetracked...

You're bad in this chapter! Cliffie! After that "fiery" sixth chapter!

When will Sasuke and Naruto "do it"? Can't wait. ^_^
person Yami Jay
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really want to read more!!!! I wonder, will Kakashi and Iruka play match maker?
person kijo kasumi
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea-ta-ha~ you upadated~*does a happy dance* just becareful on the post-its they can be use for good for so long before they turn on yu like dark vader :P....'come to the dark side chibi-onna and full fill your destiny'.....I WISH YU >>>-U-<<< LUCK!.....JA..
person Terry
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this progression into a relationship you having going on. Keep updating and I'll make sure to keep reading!
person Demon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHH!!! update!!! this is awsome!!! can't wait for the next chapter ^^
person Anon^^
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I read the first two chapters a while ago, but unfortunately I had to leave before finishing it, and forgot about it. I just found this fic again when you updated the other day, and I have to say I'm glad I did. The first chapter seemed a little rocky to me, though I'm not sure why, but after that the chapters have been great. I am really interested to see where you take this. Good grammar, non-repetitive words, and time are the things I like best about your story. You write well, have a large range of words you use, which is really nice when compared to some other stories, and you are taking the time to develope the characters instead of making them just jump into bed. I hope you find the time to continue this story because I think many people enjoy it greatly. Goodluck, and Ciao!
person vampchic
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. It was kind of...bitter sweet. But I'm so happy that Sasuke and Naruto are getting closer, finding the strangth they need in each other. And Sasuke is really trying to figure out his feelings instead of ignoring them. Yup, liked this chapter very much. I hope that you update soon. Cant wait to read more.
person Yit-Ha
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luv your fic! Write more please!