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for Filling the Void

by rachmax007

person Leasanwa
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I WANT SOME SASUNARU ACTION, damn it!!!!
Ngaah! Geez, I just cant wait!
Love your fic, it's so sweet!
And Naruto - the chef. Oh , so kawaii!
How about making Sasuke moan when savouring delicious cakes and dishes first? *hint, hint*
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“THAT’S IT! I’VE HAD ENOUGH! GET OUT OF MY KITCHEN!!!”

A few moments of silence.

“……But it’s my house…”

“I DON’T CARE! IN THIS KITCHEN, I AM GOD!!!”



^^; deja vu!!!!

(Lovely story so far btw <3)
person hogo-chan
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! yet another awesome chapter! You're amazingness is neverending! keep up the awesome work! this last chapter was just so cute!^_^
person akuma_river
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Now get working on the Sasu/Naru romance.


I'm waiting.....


Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
person yukiko
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
saaaaaaaaap. so sweet.

probably the best that Naruto cooked all of it.

the little kakairu is really sweet, and that Naruto is saying : the kind of : oh-my-parents-are-kissing- way lol. I don't think Iruka would have loved any other gift.
person Jadej.j
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe a mission Naurto should do is cook for Sasuke :P Great chapter
person silverfox
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a cute chapter very well written as well keep up the good wrok can't wait to see what happens next
but now i want som cake. *runs out and buys cake*yummy
update soon
person vampchic
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute! just wished that you were a little more descriptive in certain scenes.*grins*
well at least Sasuke is starting to get there! its taking him long enough. his brain better start working just a tad faster.
me getting impatient! want some SasuNaru action!!!
so yeah, anyway, update soon!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Thank you!!! ^^ I really like this chapter -- very funny and oh-so-kawaii. ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
person Germaine(2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how cute....the cake seamed to disappear though...

Ja!