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for Filling the Void

by rachmax007

person kijo kasumi
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet chibi you have such a lovey mind! TORCH sasuke-teme ass all the way!>D LADY UCHAHA! never in a million life times. out of all the narutos i've have see between fanfic and adultfic. yours is the most "real". almost like sasuke from the manga but with out the perks and the hero complex. looking forward to the next update. ja.
person kijo kasumi
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools*:P. Kakashi's and his speed Oooh! It no wonder Iruka would hid Kakashi. Kakashi SSSSOOOO owes Naruto BIG time for this "secret mission". [a stray mallet flies out of no where and hits Sasuke upside the head] *whistles* walkes away from the mallet launcher machine with the flashing green button.
person Puchu
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
myaaaaa~~~! Loved the sixth chappie~! *dances* (just took the chance to say)

Not that ch. 5 isn't great as well, but I think I reviewed it at FF.net.... ^^;

Please, keep up the amazing and drooly work~! *language runs away* bla-fa-grbh-

*glomps fic and drools*
person vampchic
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
they're making cake! how cute! or at least it sounds like they're making cake.
is it for an anniversary dinner or something?
and lady uchiha my ass!!! no girl will ever be fit for that title. only naruto.*Gives naruto a death hug**ignores the glare naruto throws for being associated with the title lady uchiha*
update soon! dont wait too long to post the next chap.!!
person hogo-chan
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is so frickin' cute! Please please please update super fast! I love your fic so much!
person silverfox
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very funny chapter
great fic u've started
and it looks like its only going to get more intesting
with each new chapter

NOW UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
person yukiko
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kakashi was going out with Iruka for three month and asked Naruto to bake a cake for the two of them, right ?

lol, can't wait to see more
person kai
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so what was the mission? to bake a cake? they getting married? XDD i like the naruto comment 'i am god!' had me laughing! XP great update!
person ghostninja85
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... cliffhangers are evil.

Aside from that, I'm happy that Sasuke is becoming more in tune with Naruto's feelings (as well as his own).

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Puchu
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! I think I've read this chapter as well. And the next one! But that doesn't make it any less great, nosiree! please, continue the great work, and update soon! *glompus fic* I wub SasuNaru, I really do. XD