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for Filling the Void

by rachmax007

person Yami Jay
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Sasuke is gonna figure soon that he's in love with Naruto... But anyway, what's the mission?
person kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. I read this story on Fictionpress! I love the story, but I've got to ask: Why is it here? If you were continuing chapter six with a lemon, then I'd understand, but you're not as far on this site as you are on FF. @_@ Anyway, like I said, I love this story, Sasuke's part especailly. I don't think you've had Naruto show any inkling towards a romantic realationship with Sasuke yet, and that's got me checking every few days for an update. I want to see what they do!
person vampchic
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost expected Kakashi to turn into Itachi or Kisama and snatch Naruto away. I liked it, having him show Naruto his face.
update soon. me want to read more. cant wait for the chapter when Sasuke realizes his feelings!!
person yukiko
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry for not reviewing lastr chapter anyway, Naruto was the cutest of the babies !!!!!!!!! nice chapter so far, and what is that special mission ?
person kai
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naruto is so cute! so protective of iruka XDD i loved it! alright, so what's the mission, that's just for the 2 of them?? update soon!
person Demon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update, update, update, update!!!!! love this fic and i can't wait for Sasuke to get closer to Naruto...-^-^-
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And another update!!! I'm impressed!!! ^___~ I really enjoyed this chapter a lot -- as much as, if not more than, the previous ones. And not just because you are developing the story, but also because I think that your writing style is "improving". Which is to say that the details and descriptions have gone from good to great. ^___~ Keep up the good work -- I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
person raven_bane
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you must make more i want more*chibi eyes and holds a jar of cookies*i will give some cookies if you make another chapter~ja ne
person MultifacetedTuneM
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the last two chapters -- very well done, quite sweet, and a good insite into the characters' personalities. Way to go!!! d(^-^)b I can't wait for the next chapter, so keep up the good work and update ASAP, kk? ^____^ ja ne!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the last two chapters -- very well done, quite sweet, and a good insite into the characters' personalities. Way to go!!! d(^-^)b I can't wait for the next chapter, so keep up the good work and update ASAP, kk? ^____^ ja ne!!!