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for Filling the Void

by rachmax007

person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Oops, sorry about that......the double review, I mean............ ^^;; *glares at her computer* Stupid internet connection.........
person twisted-sheets
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still think you have strange reviewers...at times...

Chibi-onna1: You're one of them...

Twisted-sheets: I know....
person vampchic
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute chapter. sasuke is going out of his way to make friends with naruto! though it sounds like he doesn't want to admit it to himself yet.
cant wait to read more. update soon!!
person ghostninja85
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how Naruto and Sasuke interacted in this chapter. It looks like the two of them are on their way to becoming read friends.

I also liked how Sasuke tried his best to make Naruto smile. Hopefully it'll be Naruto's turn to return the favor next chapter.

Update as soon as you can! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person kai
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes i enjoyed it!! XD update soon!!
person Puchu
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....deja vu.... o_O;; have I read this at FF.net? or wasn't the third chapter new?

Great story, though. please continue soon!
person Kit
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm never good at this stuff...i liked it alot and won't throw stuff at you for the cliffy,k?
person Jadej.j
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
snickers good chapter ready to read the next one :D
person vampchic
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, i dont think any one has ever writen a scene with a baby naruto before.well at least i never read one before. i liked that. but it was also sad to read.
your writing really is good. i love your descriptions. but i think that i already told you that before. ah well, update soon. i really do enjoy this story.
person tenohikari
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG ANGST! Poor chibi-Naruto.