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for Filling the Void

by rachmax007

person ghostninja85
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the flashback about Iruka's first contact with Naruto. We've never learned how Iruka grew attatched to Naruto, and it would be interesting if Kishimoto showed us how.

I wonder what Sasuke is going to say to Naruto? I hope things go well.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Baka_Tsu
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeet.... I can't believe you left it off at such a cliffhanger though. xD SHAME ON YOU! At any rate, I like where this is going =d Update soon! >D
person kai
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
glad you agree with me there!! XDD Anyways, how dare you leave it there!! You must update soon!!! *does a lil dance* you put kakashi and iruka together, yay!!! Woohoo!!! XP Update soon!!!
person yukiko
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying so far, but I do hate cliffhanger so ..

and the part with the woman and naruto baby ... damn I couldn't, even if I saw him killed my parents I could never hate a baby.
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your welcome
still good
really hope you update soon
person Cassie
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story and it could be left at that if you wished, but pleeeeeeeeaaaase write more to it? *big puppy dog eyes* pwease?
person Pixagi
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue, like right now. I mean it, NOW!<3
person kai
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting start. I really enjoy sasu/naru fics! And yes they do have the same eyes, i always thought, jsut that naruto's mask is just better than everyone elses. Update soon, i wanna see where you go with this story!!
person Kusachu
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like this. YAY! seems like it could be a very long and involved story. I'm looking forward to more!
d(^-^)b
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOooooo......very interesting!!! ^___^ I really liked this -- please, continue!!! And keep up the good work!!!