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schedule
April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice, insde his mind and all .... you hav to continue pwease !!!!
schedule
April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! I absolutely loved it! I thought you wrote extremely well - you should definitely continue it!
schedule
April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
would like to see what happens next :D
schedule
April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice beginning. Do not be afraid to dig in deep and develop the character. Keep up the good work.
schedule
April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, me like. yup, yup, yup!
diffidently write more! update as soon as you can!!!
matane.
diffidently write more! update as soon as you can!!!
matane.
schedule
April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its a good start ^_^ continue