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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEN IS THE LEMON COMING ANY WAY I LOVE TEASING NARUTO AND UNSETTLED SASUKE
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've heard many good things about this fic and i see what the others have said about it. ^_^
really like it.
thank you.
really like it.
thank you.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs contentedly* You updated. Bwahahaha the fox pheromones of DEATH!!! Update again soon, ne?
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute, fun , and hot. In my opinion, I don't think you should to the baby talk thing with Naruto. It ends up being annoying and uncute. Cuteness is something that can not be layed down too thick. Good job any way, and keep up the good work.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooo hot!!! those scenes in the bar...wow! and things are really getting good. i wonder how much trouble those two will get into trying to get the scrolls? knowing the way people react around naruto and how sasuke gets jealous, i'd say things will be heating up again. and i wonder, when the mission's over, how will those two act around each other? i guess i'll just have to wait and see! but you know what really cracks me up about your story? sasuke's inner demons arguing with him! i can just picture lil orochimaru and lil itachi sitting on his shoulder bitching at him. so incredibly cute! anyways...great story (and some of the best lemons i've read). later!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story! cant wait for the next update. love the parts where sasuke got nose bleeds. lol
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! This was just as good as the first 2 chapters! Please udpate soon!
P.S. Sasuke's still a hot mofo, even if 'Lepord-chan' is a little sex kitten ^_-
P.S. Sasuke's still a hot mofo, even if 'Lepord-chan' is a little sex kitten ^_-
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
humph!!! and i thought we were going to get some real lemons too!!*crosses arms and pouts*
but i still liked it!! yup, yup, yup. i love that whole demons on his shoulder stuff. i could just picture them standing there mocking him and doing there little dance!
but i can also picture them doing other things as well soo....yeah, missed up mind i have.
well cant wait for the next update. cant wait to see what yummy things you can come up with next!
but i still liked it!! yup, yup, yup. i love that whole demons on his shoulder stuff. i could just picture them standing there mocking him and doing there little dance!
but i can also picture them doing other things as well soo....yeah, missed up mind i have.
well cant wait for the next update. cant wait to see what yummy things you can come up with next!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally thought it was the funniest chapter yet. I just love this fic. I sqealed as soon as I saw a new chapter was up. And immediately informed my sister, becasue she's reading this too.
The chibiness of Naruto is too much....
The chibiness of Naruto is too much....
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, it's not as funny but it's more ... 'hot'