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for The Shackled Stallion

by NuttyApple

person ayachan
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooh! screw the mission! hurry and let them screw each other ! :P " Left Demon (Orochimaru, the bastard) did a split" omg, i laughed my ass off at that line.... i thought the beginning was just as funny as your past chapters, and the rest of the story...... HOT!!!! update asap please ^oo^
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was damn sexy... yup i think i need to read the rest of your stuff cuz i am a Gaara/neji fan and if its as good as this i am gonna do cartwheels of joy! and saske's demons were absolutly hysterical... the whole thing was well written and naruto was just tooo HOT!!
person akuma_river
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
person Alie
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Love the descriptive almost-lemon - soooo hot! I also really enjoyed your Neji/Gaara fics too. I hope there's more where that came from! The way you write these sexy scenes is amazing, one of the best I've read (definitely on par with a het romance book...)^^
Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more (of any of your stories)
person DeadUchiha
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I...think...i...might...just...die...*drip*drip*drip*
person Tsugath
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, had to re-read it when I got home from work. Just as steamy as the first time I read it. So can they dance the next chapter?
person ayachan
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o sasunaru? sounds more like a narusasu to me... "This was the problem with having Itachi as your brother and Orochimaru as your mentor. You got demons on both shoulders. Horny demons." omg, i love that line... pure genius! i love this fic~ please keep up w/ the good work
person SilentInquisition
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was AWESOME. *giggles* Verrry nice. I had mental images going that rivaled none other. I'm waiting for the next chappie. Indulge me in a timely matter, ne?
person Baka_Tsu
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow o_o That was hot xD~ I love how the story's going so far ;D Looking foward to an update! ^^
person T.K-kun
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... HAHA good chapter. the story is coming along so well. naruto seems more handsome
then sasuke! haha that's cool though, everyone should want naruto!!! haha. good job on this
chapter. can't wait for you to update for the next chapter =D GREAT STORY!! <3