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by Jiro

schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweetly sad! i can see naruto doing this just to make sasuke happy! poor naruto. i love the fic though
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I fucking adore you. If anyone does give you crap for this, I will personally hunt them down and destroy them for their pathetic, close-minded, warped fantasies. I think, if nothing else, Naruto IS into girls, which is why I always portray him as bisexual or maybe Sasuke-sexual, cause anything else destroys his basic character. You took a risk, and the execution was perfect and I love the way you ended it. I have hardcore respect for you now, like, forever. In fact, I feel inspired to write in this universe, and once I get done with my backlog of updates, I might come to you to OK it.

Keep on keepin' on.
person Zusume
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like you were wrong to think Naru/Sasu fans would hate this. I am of them, and I loved it, more so than othre fluffy mutual feelings fics I've read. You had a great idea and wrote it out beautifully, that's all I can say. I'm at a loss for words, but I still wanted to review to say how much I liked it.
person arora
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am a die hard Sasu/naru and i love the fic. somehow naruto always came off as likeing any attention. boy or girl. sasuke would like an equaly powerful person to be with him, so yup he would defintly be gay. and you pull it off well. not naruto the super uke but wanting Sasuke any way he could have him. very nice.
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm deadly agree with Nes. Sasuke might be asexual as he's an Avenger or homosexual as he definitely undoubtfully not attracted to women. Also, your drabble didn't cover Naruto's attachment and reason of his actions completely (aka too short! I want more @#&%* okay). However, this is still a very good drabble and an intense one. I'm not a fans of SasuNaru more likely NaruSasu fans but hey, I'm an equal opportunity believer :)

May
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was like, one of the greatest Sasu/Naru fics I've read in a *long* time.

It was very short, but it was to the point. It portrayed all of Naruto's emotions wonderfully. I think you got both of their characters down. Wonderful job!
person Nissie
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is rather sad... But you write so well it makes up for the sadness ^^

Poor, poor Sasuke. And Naruto too. I don't even want to know what'll happen if Sasuke finds out... ;-; Nah, I feel really sad now.

But I like your writing ^^
person P1
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No. I'm happy with it nonetheless. Sort of bittersweet and almost angsty but not quite. it's the normal angst you think about in real life rather than the over the edge, 'they hate me' 'my life is over' 'why is everything so dark' stuff that you get in a lot of fics. Nicely done, very good, rather angsty, poetic and beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful contribution to our Naruto comminuty!
person Tricycle
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. :) I loved how you gave Naruto the upper hand in this one, as opposed to how authors usually give it to Sasuke
person dark_orion
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Kind of a tear-jerker, but it was a more realistic concept than a lot of fics that I have read.